办公室主任核稿误区:对秘书写的稿子一笔不动,等于承认自己没水平
<section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 2em; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important; overflow-wrap: break-word !important;">办公室主任的核稿艺术</span></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 2em; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important; overflow-wrap: break-word !important;">李大刚</span></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 2em; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">核稿是办公室主任的一项重要职责,也是一门重要的领导艺术。</span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">办公室主任应注意根据不同的执笔对象,不同的时间要求和不同的稿件内容,确定不同的核稿方法。直接修改法——初稿比较成熟,不需“伤筋动骨”,直接在原稿上做些“添枝加叶”或删繁就简的工作;亦或初稿虽不怎么成熟,但时间较紧,只好直接动手修改。</span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">面批法——</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">初稿与原来的要求相差甚远,且执笔者又是“新手”,可同执笔者面对面地进行修改,向执笔者讲明之所以修改的道理。这种方法有利于促进新人迅速进入“角色”,提高业务水平。</span></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">口授法——</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">执笔者是新手,原稿较差,且时间较紧,办公室主任可根据领导对文稿的要求,讲一句,让执笔者写一句,然后连篇成文。</span></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">会诊法——</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">对由多人合作,且改动量较大的稿件,应组织秘书人员对文搞进行集体剖析,肯定长处,找出不足,讨论修改意见,然后再让执笔者修改。</span></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">研讨法——</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">对自尊心较强,且有一定文字功夫的秘书,所写稿件偶尔偏离领导意图的,不适宜直接进行修改,而采用商洽的办法,同执笔者一起重温领导的意图,一起研讨表达方式,在他心悦诚服的基础上,放手让他自己修改。</span></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">提示法——</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">对改动较大,时间又不十分紧迫的文稿,在原文需修改处写出提示性的修改意见,让执笔者一边修改,一边体会修改的道理。</span></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">会商法——</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">对文稿中提法同部门利益有冲突,或部门与部门之间意见有分歧,需统一思想的,协助主管领导召集部门的同志,按照党的方针政策和领导的意图进行协调,在思想基本统一的基础上再确定如何修改。</span></span></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">无论采取哪种核稿方法,办公室主任都要从理论与实践、宏观与微观、逻辑与形象等多种角度、多种关系上进行审慎思考。在内容上主要看文稿的主题是否正确,与党和国家的有关方针、政策,国家的法律、法规以及上级的有关文件精神是否一致,与平行机关以及本机关过去的有关规定是否矛盾,同政策相联系的理论观点是否正确,与本地区的实际情况是否符合,提出的措施是否可行等。在文字上,主要看文稿的逻辑联系是否严密,条理是否清晰,结构是否合理,用词是否得当,引文是否准确,论据选取是否符合事实等。办公室主任的核稿方式正确与否,直接影响到秘书人员积极性、主动性、创造性的发挥,直接影响到办公室主任与秘书之间的关系和自己在秘书中的形象。因此,办公室主任应重视核稿方式所产生的效应,培养正确、健康的核稿方式,努力克服以下几种情况:</span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">一、轻率型:</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-family: 微软雅黑, sans-serif; box-sizing: border-box !important;">在实际工作中,有些办公室主任事先没有征求领导意见,就向秘书发号施令,核稿时仍自行其是,结果与领导意图相差甚远,只好“重打锣鼓另开张”。这不仅给自己核稿带来不应有的难度,耽误了时间,而且弄得秘书人员叫苦不迭,也容易对办公室主任产生不信任感。</span></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">**** Hidden Message *****</section><p></p> 公文的体式关系着公文的运转效率和工作效能的发挥。核稿人员必须按照《国家行政机关公文处理办法》的要求审核文稿体式,查看文种使用是否合适,标题是否准确,发文机关和收文机关的关系处理得是否恰当,主送、抄送机关的范围是否合适,有无乱抄送、滥抄送以及漏抄送的现象,秘密等级和紧急程度是否恰当,以及秘密等级、紧急程度、发文字号、附件、附注是否合适,特别有处理好党政不分、请示与报告不分、越级行文等问题。 稿中提法同部门利益有冲突,或部门与部门之间意见有分歧,需统一思想的,协助主管领导召集部门的同志,按照党的方针政策和领导的意图进行协调,在思想基本统一的基础上再确 动性、创造性的发挥,直接影响到办公室主任与秘书之间的关系和自己在秘书中的形象。因此,办公室主任应重视核稿方 核稿是比起草人员水平更高、更为复杂的工作,必须认真对待,切不可马虎 些办公室主任事先没有征求领导意见,就向秘书发号施令,核稿时仍自行其是,结果与领导意图相差甚远,只好“重打锣鼓另开张”。这不仅给自己核稿带来不应有的难度,耽误了时间,而且弄得秘书人员叫苦不迭,也容易对办公室主任产生不信
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