老猫 发表于 2016-3-27 10:15:09

真有“一字之师”?不信来看俺领导改的这个字!

<section class="tn-Powered-by-XIUMI" style="margin-top: 0.5em; margin-bottom: 0.5em; padding: 0.3em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; border: 0px;"><section class="tn-Powered-by-XIUMI" style="padding: 10px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 1px solid rgb(192, 200, 209); box-shadow: rgb(170, 170, 170) 0px 0px 10px; font-size: 1em; line-height: 1.4; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: inherit; text-decoration: inherit; background-color: rgb(250, 250, 239);"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  </span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(255, 76, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">老猫的话</strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; 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box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; border-top-left-radius: 0.5em; border-top-right-radius: 0.5em; border-bottom-right-radius: 0.5em; border-bottom-left-radius: 0.5em; box-shadow: rgb(165, 165, 165) 0.2em 0.2em 0.1em; font-size: 1em; font-family: inherit; text-decoration: inherit; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); border-color: rgb(249, 110, 87); background-color: rgb(227, 73, 48);"><section class="tn-Powered-by-XIUMI" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; line-height: 28.8px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">从“一字之师”谈文贵适用</span></strong></section></span><section style="max-width: 100%; width: 0px; height: 0px; clear: both; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">不同文体、不同文种有不同的语言要求</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。譬如:“章程”“条例”语意周密、面面俱到;“决定”“命令”则威严肯定、言简意明。上行文言敬语恭,下行文则权威庄重,平行文则礼貌尊重。大家说是不是这样子的?</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">比如,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">强制性的用“必须”,规定性的用“应该”,报请性的用“拟请”,商洽性的用“烦请”,词句不同,则语气不同,表达的态度也不同。是不是如此</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">?</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">再譬如,“不予同意”“不同意”“不拟同意”</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">都是不同意,但表达效果一样不?不拟同意,实际还是不同意</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">,但不同意有点生硬,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">不拟同意呢,就是本来准备同意,但由于种种原因,才不准备同意</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。</span>言外之意,不就是请谅解吗。我们也有难处嘛。语气语调是不一样的</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。懂了吗</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">,俺是这样理解的。但不知正确与否?</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">所以,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">无论文体、文种,还是用词、用语,都要讲究适用二字</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。某种情况下,适合、适用的,才是最好的。就像演播室春秋老秘说过的“以通过为原则”</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">,咋才能通过,就是适用。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">别看公文,学问大着呢!</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">俺记得曾经在这里讲过一个故事</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。俺刚刚上班时,第一天领导就叫起草一个会议通知,当时想,不就是想看看俺的字儿写的咋样吗?俺想</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">着一个通知,一定写的不让领导改一个字。于是就时间地点注意事项,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">最后是“望按时参加“</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。反复看了三遍,觉得改不成一个字,然后呈送领导。结果,领导也是看了一遍又一遍,我就在旁边站着,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">觉得应该没啥问题了吧,自觉的那字也不丑。结果呢,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">领导拿起笔,偏偏改了一个字,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;">把那个“望“字,改成了”请“。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">哎呀,额的妈呀。领导真是高啊!</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">对下级说“望“也无可厚非。但一说“请“,就不一样嘛。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(255, 76, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;">望,是希望,真不来,也能说过去,但请就不同了嘛,一定得来,不来就是不给面子嘛。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">看着是尊重,请你来开会。实际上呢,是要求你必须来,不来不行的!</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 38px; line-height: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;中国汉字博大精深啊。所以,你别看适用二字,足够大家学习一辈子的。(本文节选自余之舰在文稿评改演播室的讲稿)</span></p></section></section><section class="tn-Powered-by-XIUMI" style="margin-top: 0.5em; margin-bottom: 0.5em; padding: 0.3em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; border: 0px;"><section class="tn-Powered-by-XIUMI" style="padding: 10px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 1px solid rgb(192, 200, 209); box-shadow: rgb(170, 170, 170) 0px 0px 10px; 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