《众秘夜思》第一集：畅所欲言（行来思往 2014年8月11日）
<div align="left"><div align="left"><p class="p0"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">《众秘夜思》首话：畅所欲言（行来思往<span lang="EN-US"> 2014</span>年<span lang="EN-US">8</span>月<span lang="EN-US">11</span>日）<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p><p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24pt; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="text-indent: 32pt; line-height: 28pt; background-color: white; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; "><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 黑体; ">时间：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; ">2014</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; ">年<span lang="EN-US">8</span>月<span lang="EN-US">11</span>日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Tahoma; "><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="text-indent: 32pt; line-height: 28pt; background-color: white; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; "><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 黑体; ">地点：</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; ">老秘网“<span lang="EN-US"><a href="http://www.caiyes.cn/forum.php?mod=forumdisplay&fid=35" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US">文稿修改演播室</span></span></a></span>”（<span lang="EN-US">QQ</span>群号：<span lang="EN-US">366351120</span>）</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Tahoma; "><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="text-indent: 32pt; line-height: 28pt; background-color: white; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; "><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 黑体; ">主持：</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; ">行来思往</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Tahoma; "><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="text-indent: 32pt; line-height: 28pt; background-color: white; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; "><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 黑体; ">整理：</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; ">向阳花</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Tahoma; "><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="text-indent: 32pt; line-height: 28pt; background-color: white; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; "><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: 黑体; ">具体内容：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Tahoma; "><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">各位同行大家晚上好。在 “文稿修改演播室”正式运行的第一个晚上，很高兴能和大家一起共话《众秘夜思》。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24pt; "><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">首先，让我们为“文稿修改演播室”的正式运行，来点掌声。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24pt; "><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">今晚主要跟大家进行文字交流。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">六层灰：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">（上次你在文稿修改演播室所讲的）“三点法”主要针对文章的目的和意义这一部分吗？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋"> 用在这一块，比较好使，基本能通吃。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">霞光：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-weight:
bold">“</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">三点式</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-weight:
bold">”</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">，吸引眼球！印象深刻！<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">目前，主要想和大家交流探讨一些公文写作的基本方法，解决下笔难的问题。我也是过来人，下笔难的困难都有过。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">六层灰：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">（“三点法”中所提到的）“二元结构”能不能理解为：从大的层面向小的方面转移落位的通道？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">“二元结构”，简单地理解，就是标题里有两个不同的主体，一高一低。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">六层灰：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">感觉用起来茫然不知所措。最大的问题还是一段话的逻辑结构混乱解决不了，有时候自己念过去觉得很顺，但是领导总能挑出一堆毛病。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">这个需要一定的历练的过程。在于对材料的整体把握，和逻辑思维、文字的运用能力。首先方法要对路子。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">六层灰：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">恩，前两天看了老秘网上的一篇文章，首先就是说，井要挖好，我觉得方法就如一个容器，也就是用方法去抓平常所思所悟。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">能举个“二元结构”的例子吗？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">看一下这个标题，“开展党的群众路线教育实践活动，是实现党的十八大确定的奋斗目标的必然要求</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-weight:
bold">”</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋"> 。这就是我理解的典型的“二元结构”的标题：
一个是具体的活动，另一个是奋斗目标。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">这样分啊。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">这类部分（工作、活动的重要性或目的意义）的标题，一般都采用“一元结构”和“二元结构”，以“二元结构”为主。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">在日常应用中，有必要这样细致的归类分析吗？有什么意义呢？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">通常情况下在起草某项工作或活动的目的意义时，需要这样来分析，组织材料，这与我们起草这部分公文材料的习惯有关。比如，谈到重要性、目的意义，我们一般都把所要开展的活动或工作放在全局、大局、整体工作等方面来考量，认识所要开展的活动或工作的站位。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">指尖绚烂：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">放在环境中来分析？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">路味：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">醍醐灌顶<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">经常写这部分内容，多看多体会，大家印象会更深些。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">哦，这都上升到方法论的高度了，平时在无意识中也许我们已经这样做了，但是没有意识到，更没有从文章结构上给予分析。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">指尖绚烂：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">比如说某些活动（拿群教说），中央如何部署，习总书记怎么要求，省里如何动作，你该怎么办？比如说分析经济，要从国内大形势，全省规划布局和自身特点来分析优劣势，结论是要清楚认识，困难与希望同在，机遇与挑战并存。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">写材料也要琢磨个窍门，找找门道。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">指尖绚烂：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">跳出自己谈自己，从环境看，从他人看，客观地看。说一千道一万，要全面熟悉工作，这是核心，再掌握方法。先把握好写什么（内容），再追求怎么写（方法）。此后建议学习一些写作和逻辑的基础知识，这方面有很多现成的资料，如大手笔是怎样炼成的（谢亦森），李瑞环有一个古典诗词摘录，可以看看，增添文彩，再有空，看看张保忠、岳海翔等专家的书，还有一个，以前研究经济的专家王梦奎，写的《怎样写文章》一书，全是摘录的以前大家的经验之作。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="text-indent: 24pt; "><span style="font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">最重要的就是要多上老秘网，多向行来思往等老师请教，多在群里交流。当前，把习大大的系列的东西研究下，对自己有好处。</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋;mso-font-kerning:0pt">再建议学习一些写作和逻辑的基础知识。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">这是必备的基本功，多学多练。这方面的文章和书籍很多。我个人以为首先选好一本适合自己的，研读透彻些，便于自己更好地理解和把握。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">还有我这样的菜鸟，就得多看你们交流 <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">大家都是同行，利用老猫创设的这个平台，互相交流提高。我们也曾经很菜，现在只不过是以时间换得了一点空间。未来还是你们的。呵呵。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">问题是我菜的都不知道该说点啥！<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体;mso-font-kerning:
0pt">无悔：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋;mso-font-kerning:
0pt">三年最快可以达到什么水平？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">这要看自己的功底了。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">指尖绚烂：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">这需要一个过程。积累学习的过程。不是一下子全部都学。饭一口口地吃，路一步步地走，知识一点点地积累。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">到位。大家畅所欲言，互相交流，也可谈一些个人想法或建议。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">我提个建议，咱们这样的交流方式不好把握主题，能不能采取通过实例来开展讨论？选取大家比较感兴趣的选题，然后找一些比较典型性的例子，发到群共享，大家以此来开展讨论<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">交流形式不限。如果我回答不了，可以记录下来，让擅长的老秘解答。我们这些老秘希望通过一些努力，能为新秘们在提高写作能力上给予真正的帮助。这也是老猫创设“文稿修改演播室”的初衷。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">没有问题就是最大的问题，像我现在提不出个问题可能就是最严重的问题了吧！<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">：不妨想想现在面对公文材料最大的困难是什么。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">无悔：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">尽了力写，感觉仍然写得不是自己想象中的效果，是什么原因啊？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24pt; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋"> </span><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体"> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">自己可以理一下头绪，看看是观点提炼方面的，还是材料组织方面的，还是结构安排方面，还是文字运用方面的原因。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">冰蓝心：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">我的问题就是遣词造句，往往也知道要表达什么，但是不知道怎么说，有时候将一句话的关键词从网上搜一下，才能说出句完整的话来，真让我觉得没有网络，我就做不了工作了。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">：这是初学者常用的方法，我们现在也常用到。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:仿宋">在网上搜索后，将中意的文章认真研读一下，对相关表述可以归类搜集整理，结合材料实际重点组合运用。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">始終如Ⅰ：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">我现在最大的问题是面对写作任务太多了，习惯在网上先看别个是怎么写的，懒与自己去思考，久而久之，发现不依靠网络后，自己无法动笔了。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">住越湖：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">我也是这种情况，很想改变，可能是心里还没有建立框架结构。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">能者多劳啊，这也是大家在工作过程中常遇到的事。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">始終如Ⅰ：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">是啊，主要是单位文秘太少了，领导觉得写东西是一件很容易的事情。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">领导往往只看字数，不注重后面的付出。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">求觉迷者：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">看结果，不问过程。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">始終如Ⅰ：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">还是行来老师了解领导。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">霞光：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">拿到一堆散乱的素材后，如何将其为我所用？如何在瓦砾堆中去发现闪光的珠宝？有时候感觉自己无法在基础材料中去拔高提炼好的观点，以致于写出来的东西索然无味。请教！<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">素材的运用是一个长期积累的过程。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">始終如Ⅰ：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">现在有时写来写去感觉有点走火入魔了，最近调换了新单位，还在熟悉情况。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">偶就是这样过来的，很残酷啊，聪明人都跑了，偶还在坚守。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">求觉迷者：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">涅槃再生。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">还有谁？：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">怎样积累词汇，怎样运用词汇、固定词语的搭配，怎样分层？还有好多好多问题都不知道怎么解决。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:仿宋">始終如Ⅰ：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">我发现在我们群里的人，都是不断追求自我、不断向前冲的人，很荣幸来到这个群里。我之前的经验就是看人民日报、或者看领导的讲话，把一些写的好的词汇积累下来。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">欣雨：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">搭好框架，但是如何让材料充实起来、生动起来？这个把握不好。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">求觉迷者：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">讲话稿可以先搭框，而总结类的要以事为主，提炼观点，不要被框架框住。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">始終如Ⅰ：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">群里面有哪些大侠看过谢亦森《大手笔是怎么炼成的》这套书没有？其实写东西最难的就是搭框架，装内容我觉得还稍微简单点。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">求觉迷者：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">词汇积累要依据领导风格，依据单位工作特性，为谁服务就为谁着想，不是你的喜好。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">行来思往：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">词汇运用，素材提炼等基本功，需要平时多看多用，活学活用。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体">旭旭：</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋">框架要怎么学习？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" align="left" style="text-indent: 24.1pt; "><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:楷体;mso-bidi-font-family:楷体"></span></b></p>**** Hidden Message *****<p class="p0" style="text-indent:24.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:仿宋"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="p0" style="text-indent:24.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt"> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div align="left"> </div></div> 今后交流记录称之为《众秘夜思》第N集，如何？祝贺行思首播成功，感谢向阳花整理成文。 集思广益，正在看大手笔是怎样炼成的，感触很多、帮助很多、提高很多。 很好很用心，很好很管用，很好很实在，认真学习， 新手学习如何写作，顶。 为什么看啥都要回复呢！？ 看了讲稿，有不少收获。 学习了，收获很大。{:4_108:}{:4_108:} 看看张保忠、岳海翔等专家的书 正在看大手笔是怎样炼成的，感触很多、帮助很多。