起草公文，这12种常见语病要当心（附案例）

老猫发表于 2021-5-21 17:29:04

<section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">公文政策性鲜明，实效性突出，其重要地位不言而喻。为了确保公文的权威性与规范性，一定要增强质量意识，在文稿写作、审核等环节严防差错发生。本文选取了三类常见语病，举例简析，以供参考。</span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102482" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-right: 10px; padding-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-image: url("https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/oJZWTpJpiaeibb6LYkAl41DibsywEicxjFlTg59euJNBdQ5LaGpwZCZUiaZ3E5bCYByibmYGxIibx1Mm8JM8fRiaBjtwFg/640?wx_fmt=png"); background-size: 100% 100%;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: flex; border-top: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195); border-bottom: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">语</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">序</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" hm_fix="322:218" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">不</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">当</strong></section></section></section></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 25px; flex-shrink: 0;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例1</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">进一步提升食品安全监管水平，确保广大人民群众生命安全和身体健康，全力推进食品安全城市创建工作。</span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">复句中最后一个分句，往往是全句语义“重心”。“确保广大人民群众生命安全和身体健康”是食品安全城市创建工作的落脚点，应当放在最后。</span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></span></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">进一步提升食品安全监管水平，全力推进食品安全城市创建工作，确保广大人民群众生命安全和身体健康。</span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例2</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; text-align: justify; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">在交流会上许多商户都与创业协会昨天签订了协议。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">句中“签订”有多个不同的状语。一般而言，多重状语修饰中心语，要按照“时间、地点、范围、对象”的顺序排列。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">许多商户昨天在交流会上都与创业协会签订了协议。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例3</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">自动化生产线减少了人工操作，生产提高了效率十几倍。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); letter-spacing: normal; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“生产提高了效率十几倍”不符合汉语表达习惯，应该是“生产效率提高了十几倍”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">自动化生产线减少了人工操作，生产效率提高了十几倍。</span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102482" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-right: 10px; padding-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-image: url("https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/oJZWTpJpiaeibb6LYkAl41DibsywEicxjFlTg59euJNBdQ5LaGpwZCZUiaZ3E5bCYByibmYGxIibx1Mm8JM8fRiaBjtwFg/640?wx_fmt=png"); background-size: 100% 100%;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: flex; border-top: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195); border-bottom: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">语</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">义</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" hm_fix="322:218" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">重</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">复</strong></section></section></section></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 25px; flex-shrink: 0;"><img data-ratio="1.5454545454545454" data-src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/oJZWTpJpiaeibb6LYkAl41DibsywEicxjFlTAOhySZSPva8Y32bUMx89zfDAN1ibgXd7ibsPlWoNrWn7dvWy0A2Gjl8g/640?wx_fmt=png" data-type="png" data-w="44" data-width="100%" _width="100%" src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/oJZWTpJpiaeibb6LYkAl41DibsywEicxjFlTAOhySZSPva8Y32bUMx89zfDAN1ibgXd7ibsPlWoNrWn7dvWy0A2Gjl8g/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" crossorigin="anonymous" alt="图片" data-fail="0" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: block; width: 25px; height: auto !important; visibility: visible !important;"></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例4</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">截至到2020年年底，我市地铁运营里程接近700千米。</span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“截至”的意思就是“截止到”，后再加“到”则语义重复。可删去“截至”，或者删去“到”，或者把“截至到”改为“截止到”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">截至2020年年底，我市地铁运营里程接近700千米。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例5</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">政务公开要把行政管理的过程公诸于社会。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“诸”是“之于”的合音，“公诸”就是“公之于”，后再加“于”则语义重复。可删去“于”，或者把“公诸于”改为“公之于”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">政务公开要把行政管理的过程公诸社会。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例6</strong><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">鉴于考虑到活动是现场直播，必须重视它的社会影响。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“鉴”本义指盛水的大盆，可用作照视的镜子，引申指观察、审查，“鉴于”就是看到、觉察到、考虑到。“鉴于”和“考虑到”连用，明显重复，取一即可。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">鉴于活动是现场直播，必须重视它的社会影响。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例7</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">销售人员热情欢迎莅临博览会的客户的到来。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“莅临”的意思是光临、来临，“莅临博览会的客户的到来”表义重复。可删去“莅临”，或者删去“的到来”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">销售人员热情欢迎莅临博览会的客户。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例8</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">目前，相关部门现正在研究扩大企业信贷资产证券化的实施方案。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“目前”指的是说话的时候，就是“现在”，后面再用“现”就是重复。可删去“目前”，或者删去“现”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">目前，相关部门正在研究扩大企业信贷资产证券化的实施方案。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102482" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-right: 10px; padding-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-image: url("https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/oJZWTpJpiaeibb6LYkAl41DibsywEicxjFlTg59euJNBdQ5LaGpwZCZUiaZ3E5bCYByibmYGxIibx1Mm8JM8fRiaBjtwFg/640?wx_fmt=png"); background-size: 100% 100%;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: flex; border-top: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195); border-bottom: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">搭</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">配</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" hm_fix="322:218" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">不</strong></section><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 6px 12px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); line-height: 1.75em; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; border-left: 1px solid rgb(2, 161, 195);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">当</strong></section></section></section></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 25px; flex-shrink: 0;"><img data-ratio="1.5454545454545454" data-src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/oJZWTpJpiaeibb6LYkAl41DibsywEicxjFlTAOhySZSPva8Y32bUMx89zfDAN1ibgXd7ibsPlWoNrWn7dvWy0A2Gjl8g/640?wx_fmt=png" data-type="png" data-w="44" data-width="100%" _width="100%" src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/oJZWTpJpiaeibb6LYkAl41DibsywEicxjFlTAOhySZSPva8Y32bUMx89zfDAN1ibgXd7ibsPlWoNrWn7dvWy0A2Gjl8g/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" crossorigin="anonymous" alt="图片" data-fail="0" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: block; width: 25px; height: auto !important; visibility: visible !important;"></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例9</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">全市各区县关于这一重大事件都做了广泛宣传。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">介词“关于”和“对于”都能构成介词结构作状语，但用“关于”的状语只能出现在主语之前，而用“对于”的状语则在主语前后均可出现。若语序不变，上例“关于这一重大事件”就只能改为“对于这一重大事件”。“关于”表示关联、涉及，“对于”指出对象。上例“这一重大事件”是“广泛宣传”的对象，所以应当用“对于”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">全市各区县对于这一重大事件都做了广泛宣传。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例10</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">把握监管规律，强化科学治理，全面推进食品安全监管工作科学化水平。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“全面推进食品安全监管工作科学化水平”搭配不当。可删去“水平”，或者把“推进”改为“提升”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">把握监管规律，强化科学治理，全面推进食品安全监管工作科学化。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例11</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“十四五”期间，我市综合配套改革问题将持续推进。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="paragraph" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); letter-spacing: normal; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“我市综合配套改革问题将持续推进”搭配不当。可将“问题”改为“工作”，或者把“持续推进”改为“进一步得到解决”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">“十四五”期间，我市综合配套改革工作将持续推进。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="103379" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; padding-bottom: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding: 4px 1em; max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); border-left: 1px solid rgb(216, 160, 133); display: inline-block; background: rgb(254, 242, 232); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">病例12</strong></section><section style="margin-top: -14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 1.5em 1em 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(216, 160, 133);"><section data-autoskip="1" style="max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(133, 98, 75); background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(134, 87, 85); box-sizing: border-box !important;">强化疫情防控，对重点部门加大消毒频次和通风力度。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: -10px; margin-right: 9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-end; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 35px;"><br></section></section></section></section></section></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="102668" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 10px auto; max-width: 100%; text-align: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 2em 1em 0em 1.5em; max-width: 100%; background: rgb(213, 232, 247); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding-bottom: 2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-left: 2px solid rgb(52, 139, 209);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">简析：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); letter-spacing: normal; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“通风力度”可以“加大”，但“加大消毒频次”却搭配不当。可以将“加大”改为“增加”。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 1.5em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin-left: -9px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: flex-start; align-items: flex-start; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; border-radius: 100%; border-width: 1px; border-style: solid; border-color: rgb(213, 232, 247); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; align-self: flex-start; width: 7px; height: 7px; border-radius: 100%; background: rgb(255, 174, 0); overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section><section style="margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; display: flex; justify-content: center; align-items: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-brushtype="text" style="padding-right: 1em; padding-left: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1.5px; color: rgb(67, 113, 181); background: rgb(255, 255, 255); height: 32px; line-height: 32px;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：</strong></strong></section><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 0px; height: 1px; border-top: 15px solid transparent; border-left: 15px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); border-bottom: 17px solid transparent; overflow: hidden;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section></section></section><section data-autoskip="1" style="margin-top: 20px; margin-left: 15px; max-width: 100%; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; letter-spacing: 1.5px; font-size: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); background: transparent; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; letter-spacing: normal; color: rgb(10, 75, 129); box-sizing: border-box !important;">强化疫情防控，对重点部门增加消毒频次和通风力度。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 34px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 16px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: normal; font-size: 16px; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></section><font color="rgb(136, 136, 136)"><font style="font-size: 15px">（作者分别系上海文艺出版社副总编辑、上海咬文嚼字文化传播有限公司总经理，浙江淳安县融媒体中心编辑王敏王莉来源：秘书工作）</font></font><br>

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