领导致辞：该说啥，不该说啥，都有啥讲究
<p align="center"><font face="方正小标宋简体" size="5">领导致辞：该说啥，不该说啥，都有啥讲究</font></p><p align="center" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:0.0000pt;mso-char-indent-count:0.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:center;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);letter-spacing:-0.5000pt;font-size:16.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">——结合一篇县级起草的省级领导致辞及录音对比来分析</span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:16.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"> <wbr></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:28.0000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">所谓领导致辞，一般指上级领导受邀到下级单位参加工作活动时所讲的话，但与一般领导讲话不同的是，无须长篇大论讲意义、提要求、作部署，而是比较简短、比较应景、比较活泼，亮明上级立场、领导观点、未来希望，体现上级领导对下级单位的支持和希望，也就可以了。尽管领导致辞相对比较简单，但也有着严格的内在要求和规律规范。下面，结合一篇县级为省级起草的领导致辞及录音对比加以分析。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:28.0000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">几年前，</font>S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font><font face="Times New Roman">H</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">市</font><font face="Times New Roman">G</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">县拟举办一次</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">国际生命科学峰会暨大健康产业发展论坛</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">，由国内外生命科学领域的知名专家作现场演讲。提前向省级领导发出了邀请，并起草准备了领导致辞。本来，猜测莅临会议的可能是省长或者副省长，致辞也是按此准备的，结果实际莅临会议的是兼任省卫计委巡视员的省政协领导。按常理讲，反正都是省领导，为一个县级活动致辞，一篇稿子是完全可以通用的。结果不然，据现场录音整理显示，致辞内容发生了一些非常妥当的取舍，不由得不令人引发对领导致辞写作特点的深思。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:28.1000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><b><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(133,58,79);font-weight:bold;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">【注：黑色字体为原稿，蓝色字体为录音整理稿，红色字体为重点改动语句。】</font></span></b></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">第一段原稿：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">各位专家，各位来宾：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">大家好！</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">今天，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">非常高兴参加这次</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">国际生命科学峰会暨大健康产业发展论坛</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">。这是</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">H<font face="仿宋_GB2312">市</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">推进高质量发展</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">的一项创新举措，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">也是全省经济社会发展中的一次盛会。</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">借此机会，我谨代表中共</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">委、</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">人民政府，向出席本次活动的各位专家、各位来宾表示诚挚的欢迎</font>!<font face="仿宋_GB2312">对本次活动的举办表示热烈的祝贺</font><font face="Times New Roman">!</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">向大家长期以来关心支持</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">经济社会发展</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">表示衷心的感谢！</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">第一段录音：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">各位专家，各位来宾：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">大家</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">下午</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">好！非常高兴参加这次</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">国际生命科学峰会暨大健康产业发展论坛</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">。这是</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">H<font face="仿宋_GB2312">市</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">推进高质量发展的一项创新举措。借此机会，我谨代表</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省卫计委</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">，向出席本次活动的各位专家、各位来宾表示诚挚的欢迎</font>!<font face="仿宋_GB2312">对本次活动的举办表示热烈的祝贺</font><font face="Times New Roman">!</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">向大家长期以来关心支持</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">卫生健康事业</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">表示衷心的感谢！</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">【简评】</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">开头，不说</font>“今天”，难道会是明天吗？能简则简。是不是“</span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">全省经济社会发展中的一次盛会</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">”，从省领导角度讲，应该严谨作判断。向别人表达感谢，也需要恰到好处，如果超出感谢的范围，有海口、大话之嫌。作为省卫计委巡视员，对大家支持全省卫生健康事业表示感谢，不说支持全省经济社会事业（适合省长或副省长口吻），极为恰当，贴合讲话者的身份。</span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">第二段原稿：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">生命健康是人类的基本需求，生命科学是前沿的基础科学。在新的历史条件下，大健康产业方兴未艾，已成为全球最大的产业之一。本次活动以</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">世界智慧助推大健康产业发展</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">为主题，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">契合实施健康中国战略的要求，符合</font>21<font face="仿宋_GB2312">世纪大健康产业发展的新趋势。</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">通过汇集精英智慧，传递权威信息，必将对促进</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">乃至我国</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">大健康产业发展产生</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">重大而</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">深远的影响。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">第二段录音：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">生命健康是人类的基本需求，生命科学是前沿的基础科学。在新的历史条件下，大健康产业方兴未艾，已成为全球最大的产业之一。本次活动以</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">世界智慧助推大健康产业发展</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">为主题，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">按照</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">健康中国战略要求，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">汇集精英智慧，传递权威信息，必将对促进</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">大健康产业发展</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">产生深远的影响。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">【简评】</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">健康中国战略是中央方针，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">契合</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">不契合</font>“</span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">实施健康中国战略的要求</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">”</span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">，符合</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">不符合</font>“</span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">21<font face="仿宋_GB2312">世纪大健康产业发展的新趋势</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">”，严格来讲不是一个简单的问题。改为“按照</span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">健康中国战略要求</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">”，是合乎实际的，也是谨慎的。这次活动的影响有多大，原稿说法有一厢情愿之嫌，录音稿删除了对我国影响的说法，更加客观、准确、严谨。</span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">第三段原稿：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">习近平总书记指出，</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">没有全民健康，就没有全面小康</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">，</font><font face="Times New Roman">“</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">健康是民族昌盛和国家富强的重要标志</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">。近年来，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">坚持以习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想为指导，按照高质量发展的要求，把健康产业作为</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">十三五</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">重点发展的产业之一，促进与养老、旅游、互联网、体育、食品的跨界融合，重点打造医药制造业、中医药产业、健康养老服务业、健康旅游业、医疗卫生服务业等主导产业，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">依托各地资源禀赋和产业基础规划建设一批特色鲜明的健康产业集群，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">大力推进健康</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">建设。</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">按照《</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(255,0,0);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">大健康、新医疗</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">产业发展规划（</font><font face="Times New Roman">2016—2020</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">年）》，到</font><font face="Times New Roman">2020</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">年，全省规模以上</font><font face="Times New Roman">“</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">大健康、新医疗</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">产业产值比</font><font face="Times New Roman">2015</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">年翻一番，产业总规模超过</font><font face="Times New Roman">8000</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">亿元，成为全省战略性支柱产业。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">第三段录音：</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">习近平总书记指出，</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">健康是民族昌盛和国家富强的重要标志</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">没有全民健康，就没有全面小康</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">。近年来，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">坚持以习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想为指导，按照高质量发展的要求，把健康产业作为</font>“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">十三五</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">重点发展的产业之一，促进与养老、旅游、互联网、体育、食品的跨界融合，重点打造医药制造业、中医药产业、健康养老服务业、健康旅游业、医疗卫生服务业等主导产业，依托各地</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">特色</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">资源</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">，</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">大力推进健康</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">S<font face="仿宋_GB2312">省</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(0,0,255);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">建设。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:28.0000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">【简评】</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">将引用的总书记论述进行前后置换，先正说，后反说，更加符合一般思维习惯和认识规律。鉴于致辞场合、必要程度、精简原则，故宜省去对</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Times new roman';mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">“<font face="仿宋_GB2312">大健康、新医疗</font><font face="Times New Roman">”</font><font face="仿宋_GB2312">产业发展规划</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">的介绍。</font></span></p><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体"><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;">**** Hidden Message *****</p></font></span><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:黑体;color:rgb(0,176,240);letter-spacing:-0.3000pt;font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="黑体">【总评】</font></span><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312">领导致辞应谨慎使用判断语句。每一个判断，都代表着一种深意。特别是作为上级领导，如果肯定一个下级单位先进，就意味着否定其他下级单位落后，是必须谨慎的。就像父母夸奖其中一个孩子应该考虑其他孩子的感受。还有一个大小层面问题，也是站位高低问题，下级为上级领导起草致辞讲话，必须跳出自我小圈子，树立适合领导层次的格局视野，把一些问题放到更高更大的层面去看，给出客观、中肯、稳妥的判断，既不能局限在小视野里冒冒失失地自我标榜，更不能贪大求洋地自我吹嘘，要力求客观、精准、超脱、大气。总之，领导致辞应避免说以下几类话：不说禁不住推敲的模棱话，不说影射其他地区单位的反感话，不说超出身份范围的见外话，不说定语冗长、细节繁琐的绕弯话。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin-top:0.0000pt;margin-right:0.0000pt;margin-bottom:0.0000pt;margin-left:0.0000pt;mso-para-margin-right:0.0000gd;mso-para-margin-left:0.0000gd;text-indent:26.8000pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0000;text-autospace:ideograph-numeric;mso-pagination:none;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:20.0000pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly;"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'Times new roman';mso-bidi-font-family:'Times new roman';color:rgb(112,48,160);font-size:14.0000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;"><font face="仿宋_GB2312"><span style="display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 18.66px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 37.33px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">（备注：雾端凝眸头像为本人微信公众号“文以载道不远人”，欢迎文秘交流）</span><b></b><i></i><u></u><sub></sub><sup></sup><strike></strike><br></font></span></p> 比较简短、比较应景、比较活泼，亮明上级立场、领导观点、未来希望，体现上级领导对下级单位的支持和希望，也就可以了 感谢分享，拜读！！拜读！！拜读！！拜读！！ 感谢分享，拜读！！拜读！！拜读！！拜读！！ 升级成功，测试一下 没有全民健康，就没有全面小康 非常好的借鉴文章！分析得真好!认真学习，好好吸收。 将引用的总书记论述进行前后置换，先正说，后反说，更加符合一般思维习惯和认识规律。鉴于致辞场合、必要程度、精简原则，故宜省去对“大健康、新医疗”产业发展规划的介绍。 领导致辞应谨慎使用判断语句。每一个判断，都代表着一种深意。特别是作为上级领导，如果肯定一个下级单位先进，就意味着否定其他下级单位落后，是必须谨慎的。就像父母夸奖其中一个孩子应该考虑其他孩子的感受。