在第九届遵义市旅游产业发展大会开幕式上的主旨演讲
<section powered-by="xiumi.us" style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; text-align: justify; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1px;"><section style="padding-right: 5px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; line-height: 2;"><p style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; clear: both; min-height: 1em; text-align: center;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-size: 18px;">青山藏不住红绿正芳华</span></strong></p></section></section><section powered-by="xiumi.us" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1px; text-align: center;"><p style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; clear: both; min-height: 1em;">——在第九届遵义市旅游产业发展大会开幕式上的主旨演讲</p></section><section powered-by="xiumi.us" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; text-align: justify; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1px;"><p style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; clear: both; min-height: 1em;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"></p></section><section powered-by="xiumi.us" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; letter-spacing: 1px; text-align: center; color: rgb(160, 160, 160); font-size: 12px;"><p style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; clear: both; min-height: 1em;">中共遵义市委副书记、市长魏树旺</p></section><section powered-by="xiumi.us" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; text-align: justify; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1px;"><p style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; clear: both; min-height: 1em;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"></p></section><section powered-by="xiumi.us" style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; text-align: justify; font-size: 15px; letter-spacing: 1px;"><section style="padding-right: 5px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; line-height: 2;"><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-align: left; text-indent: 0em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">尊敬的各位领导、各位来宾, 女士们、先生们、朋友们:</span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">大家上午好!</span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">云来山更佳, 云去山如画, 山因云晦明, 云共山高下。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【这四句由文描写山高云深的景色。高山之上，云雾缭绕，山色因云彩的飘忽不定而忽明忽暗，忽隐忽现，云彩则因山的高低不同而有上有下，错落分布。这种在自然赋予的奇特景色，得到了生动表现。四句中每句都嵌入“云”、“山”二字。但因为在组合、安排上有变化，所以句式并不呆板，反而由于“云”“山”两字的反复出现，使语言的表现力得到了加强。如何能敲到好处的用在这里？平时的积累。第一次看到此诗句的朋友们，抓紧背诵吧。今后没准儿还能用得上。】</span></strong>今天, 我们相聚在水色如镜、奇峰如画的云门囤, 虽夏日炎炎, 却心有凉风。在此, 我谨代表中共遵义市委、市人民政府, 向出席大会的各位领导、各位来宾表示热烈的欢迎!向长期关心支持遵义发展的各级领导、各界人士表示衷心的感谢!<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【常规性写法，加了一句“虽夏日炎炎, 却心有凉风。”生动形象。】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">很多人<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);">都知道</span></strong>遵义,<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);">但</span></strong>很多人对遵义的了解,<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);">仅限于</span></strong>一栋楼, 一栋与中国革命生死存亡相系相联的小楼。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【从众所周知的遵义为切入点，灵活运用几个关键词：都知道……但……仅限于……因为……然而……于是……原来……写的千回百转，“青山藏不住, 红绿正芳华”主旨由此及彼、由偏到全地讲得波澜起伏、跌宕生姿, 讲得文思飞扬、耐人寻味】</span></strong>因为它, 遵义在世人的眼中, 是红色的。红得正、红得烈、红得荡气回肠, 红得气宇轩昂。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);">然而</span></strong>, 其实在璀璨夺目的红色底色上, 遵义还是一座绿的城, 这绿, 是云贵高原与四川盆地、湖南丘陵携手, 在亚热带湿润季风下孕育出来的生态的绿;更是渔樵耕读、聚沙成滩, 世代传承下来的人文的绿。<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">于是</strong></span>, 走近遵义, 你会发现,<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);">原来</span></strong>遵义是这么一座城———历史与现实交映、文化与生态互融、自然与人文相连的红绿辉映之城。</span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">遵义是红色的。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【注意，三句话描写红，历史的厚重感很红，自然的美感，人文的美感，每句都很有遵义特色】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);">这红, 书写在中国革命的历史中</span></strong>。83年前, 中央红军在这里召开了彪炳史册的遵义会议, 因为遵义会议, 红色成为遵义最璀璨的底色。毛泽东在这里挥就了“苍山如海、残阳如血”的豪迈诗篇, 演绎了四渡赤水出奇兵的经典传奇。</span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">这红, 书写在赤水河畔的奇峰赤壁上</strong></span>。响誉全球的世界自然遗产赤水丹霞, 带你走进如梦似幻的奇异胜境, 一壁丹霞, 非花非火, 是岩是梦。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【这种写法非常灵活，没有一般公文那种“干巴巴”的感觉】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">这红, 书写在遵义人的人格品性里</strong></span>。一粒朝天椒, 展示的是遵义人的热情豁达。<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">一杯遵义红</strong></span>, 体现的是遵义人的古朴无华。<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">一山红高粱</strong></span>, 烈烈入长空, 洋溢着遵义人的豪情潇洒。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【三个“一”再一次写出遵义独特的红，让人留下深刻印象的红，感情饱满、激情奔放，一字、一词、一句都精练地体现了文意】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">遵义是绿色的。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【山、城、水、村四绿，达到了总书记讲得“望得见山,看得见水,记得住乡愁”的效果。画面感呼之欲出啊】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">看山, 山是绿的, 绿得久远绵长</strong></span>。恐龙不在了, 桫椤还在。沧海桑田了, 竹海还在。行万里路的徐霞客不在了, 我们的青山绿岭还千年万载的在。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【三个“不在了……还在”代入感非常强，读罢让人情不自禁的大声朗读几遍，正因了那句话“美好的文字会让人唇齿留香”，这是什么？这就是语感，这种语感在这篇文章中随处可见。】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);">看城, 城是绿的, 绿得俏丽高调</span>。遵义的城, 大大小小, 无论它是温婉如画, 还是英姿焕发。都以绿为妆、以水为眼, 浅眉低吟, 处处是景。PM2.5是别人的城, 显山露水是遵义的城。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【PM2.5、显山露水，短短两个词在这里用来表述生态环境工作，加之，用对比映衬法，“别人的……遵义的……”让人直观感受到抓环保的成效，足够了。】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">看水, 水是绿的, 绿得不忍归去</strong></span>。重阳节、赤水河, 一樽清泉入杯中, 那是茅台的魂。中秋夜、乌江岸, 一江碧水入云天, 那是遵义的魂。听双河溶洞一滴水, 从远古连绵到此时;看洪渡河中一尾鱼, 从夜郎游弋到今朝。遵义之美, 在绿水之灵, 孕育了湄江河畔, 浙大西迁一阙长歌行万里, 洛安江边, 西南硕儒名就沙滩扬四海。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【此段，处处都在排比，大排比套小排比，排比的自然贴切，排比的气势磅礴，写景状物、叙事、说理可以说句句有典故，听完之后，听众完全是被带着飞啊】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">再看乡村, 乡村也是绿的, 绿得乡愁难离</strong></span>。在这里, 春风岂止十里, 春风是百里千里, 坐在青砖碧瓦的农家小院, 你可以坐观云蒸霞蔚的赤水竹海, 行赏色彩斑斓的四季花谷, 低嗅清新甜美的稻谷米香。昔日孟郊《登科后》, “春风得意马蹄急, 一日看尽长安花。”今天你置身美丽乡村、中国茶海, 策马扬鞭, 十日难尽、绿浪无边。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【“坐观、行赏、低嗅”等形象化词语,和再一次用对比映衬法，给人留下了醉美印象, 带来了无穷惬意。】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">曾经, 人们一度认为遵义的红, 是书本上革命老区的红, 因此它是教条的、刻板的、甚至是难以亲近的。也曾经, 人们认为遵义的绿, 是边远山区的绿, 因此它是偏僻的、崎岖的, 甚至是贫困蛮荒的。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【此段作为过渡段，用两个曾经巧妙地总结大部分人记忆中的遵义，然后笔锋一转，“岂不知, 五百年后看, 云贵胜江南。”非常有时空的跨越感，收到了“绿阴不减来时路, 更添黄鹂四五声”的表达效果。】</span></strong>岂不知, 五百年后看, 云贵胜江南。</span></section><h2 style="font-weight: 400; font-size: 16px; max-width: 100%; font-family: -apple-system-font, system-ui, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; letter-spacing: 0.544px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; letter-spacing: 0.544px; 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box-sizing: border-box !important; height: auto !important; visibility: visible !important; width: 112px !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: 0.544px; font-family: -apple-system-font, system-ui, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); text-align: justify; font-size: 15px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span></p></h2><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">一代人有一代人的长征, 在今天的新长征路上, 遵义人民正奋力谱写着美好幸福的乐章, 坚守发展和生态两条底线, 坚持<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">以红带绿、以绿映红、红绿并重</strong></span>, 加快国家全域旅游示范区建设, 打造黔川渝结合部中心城市。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【关键词“长征”紧扣遵义的历史特点，以红带绿、以绿映红、红绿并重，前后呼应，浑然一体】</span></strong>在进一步完善旅游基础设施的同时, 我们加快实现“县县双高速”和“县县通铁路”, 打造黔川渝结合部综合交通枢纽, 构建“快旅慢游”服务体系。<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">在进一步</strong></span>深度挖掘红色文化资源的同时, 我们不断建设一批4A级及以上全域旅游景区景点, 打造全国著名的红色文化传承基地, 再现经典, 演绎传奇。<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">在进一步</strong></span>发挥良好的生态环境优势的同时, 我们做足山水、生态、茶酒文章, 大力培育壮大康养产业, 打造赤水河、桃花江国家级康养旅游度假区, 建成康养旅游目的地。<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">在进一步</strong></span>推进旅游服务标准化建设的同时, 我们始终坚持以游客为中心, 大力推进旅游便捷化、食宿舒适化、监管无缝化, 不断提高遵义旅游的满意率和“回头率”, 形成“文明遵义人, 喜迎八方客”的浓厚氛围。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【一般在公文表述中，很少用到“同时”这两个字，大家体会一下，公文高手就很少用，因为但凡要用到这个词，一般都是为了并列过渡，一时之间想不到更合适的过渡词句，就简单的“同时”一下，而且长此以往，容易形成习惯性语言，写着写着就写出了很多“同时”，看似天衣无缝，实则暴露了语言的贫乏。但是呢，在这里，作者一连用了四个“同时”又显得很有气势，就是因为很巧妙地把“同时”和“在进一步”结合起来，显得语言更精炼，表述更准确，把遵义当前的发展思路和举措讲的很清晰很具体。这一点非常值得借鉴，特别是那些习惯用“同时”的写手们。】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">今天的遵义, 青山藏不住, 红绿正芳华。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【既过渡，又很好起到点题作用】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">各位领导、各位来宾、各位朋友, 我们诚挚邀请大家到遵义感受红色传承的魅力,<span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91);"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;">共享绿色发展的红利</strong></span>, 来一次说走就走的醉美之旅。<strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【就这么两行半，作者对字词句的精准可见一斑，把红、绿的遵义用一句话——绿色发展的红利体现的淋漓尽致啊，仿佛这句话就是为遵义量身定制一般。还有“醉美之旅”的醉字，讲出来可能听众感觉不到啥，但是写出来非常有美感】</span></strong></span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">最后, 祝第九届遵义旅游产业发展大会圆满成功!祝各位来宾身体健康、万事如意!谢谢大家!</span></section><section style="margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 8px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; min-height: 1em; line-height: 2em; text-indent: 2em;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgba(236, 8, 8, 0.91); background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">【总之，这是一篇宣传推介一个地方的一篇不可多得的美文。既有公文的严密性与逻辑性, 又有散文的生动性与形象性, 写得那叫一个行云流水、气势酣畅, 读之让人如沐春风、如品佳酿, 其“立意精心、语言精妙、结构精巧”值得琢磨, 值得借鉴，值得反复吟诵。】</span></strong></span></section></section></section><p></p>
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