雾端凝眸
发表于 2019-8-24 11:16:54
如何把稿件从“胖子”压缩成“瘦子”
<p align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: center; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 0pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 0.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='font-family: 黑体; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font color="#000000" face="黑体">如何把稿件从</font><font color="#000000">“胖子”压缩成“瘦子”</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 0pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 0.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;'><font color="#000000"> </font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font color="#000000" face="仿宋_GB2312">压稿子，是公文工作中的一件常事。写着写着写多了，最后再压缩，有利于提炼精华。但压稿子也不容易。特别是自己压自己的稿子，困难重重，下不去手，不是舍不得，而是不知道舍什么，原因还在于思路依赖，埋没在自己业已形成的思维模式里出不来。这时最好由别的同志操刀，嘁哩喀喳一顿，不管你是否心疼，稿子总算是压缩下来了。想必有的文友有此体会。下面，试分析压缩稿子的一些经验套路。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='color: rgb(0, 0, 255); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font face="仿宋_GB2312">一、删除完成时，留下进行时和将来时。</font></span><span style='font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font color="#000000" face="仿宋_GB2312">完成时是过去已经完成的工作，进行时是正在进行的工作，将来时是即将进行的工作。常言道，好汉不提当年勇，都过去了还说它干吗。相比来讲，过去完成时说不说已经没有意义，关键是当下的进行时和下一步的将来时，可以决定事物新进展，这才是最有价值的。例如：</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'>1、**项目已建成孵化车间，正在安装智能研发设备，预计年底前完成中试及样机生产。</span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'>***项目正在安装智能研发设备，年底将完成中试及样机生产。</span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'>2、公开招商的6个村庄，已完成宅基丈量摸底，3个村已制定拆迁安置补偿方案。</span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; line-height: 28pt; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style='color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font face="仿宋_GB2312">公开招商的</font>6个村庄，3个村已制定拆迁安置补偿方案。</span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none;"><span style='color: rgb(0, 0, 255); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font face="仿宋_GB2312">二、删除次要的工作，留下主要的工作。</font></span><span style='font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font color="#000000" face="仿宋_GB2312">次要的工作不值一提，突出主要工作、重项工作才是硬道理。对于这部分，选中，回车！</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-bottom: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0.0000gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0000; mso-pagination: none;"><span style='color: rgb(0, 0, 255); font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font face="仿宋_GB2312">三、删除段首总括句。</font></span><span style='font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; font-size: 14pt; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";'><font color="#000000" face="仿宋_GB2312">总括句是提纲掣领，但是为了压缩字数，又不便减少分述部分的内容。就把曾经精心概括提炼的总括句删去吧，没什么好说的。这样能够砍掉很大篇幅，直奔主题。</font></span></p><p align="justify" style="margin: 0pt; text-align: justify; text-indent: 28pt; -ms-text-autospace: ideograph-numeric; -ms-text-justify: inter-ideograph; mso-para-margin-top: 0.0000gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0.0000gd; 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千江月
发表于 2019-8-24 23:32:09
删除次要的工作，留下主要的工作
文金双刀
发表于 2019-8-25 22:17:23
这是一篇好文章，正要学习此方面的内容，感谢
立博
发表于 2019-8-26 15:08:43
删除完成时，留下进行时和将来时
老生新谈
发表于 2019-8-27 08:54:29
压稿工作较为多，各部门的稿子上来一般都需要压一压
xdz
发表于 2019-8-27 08:56:42
册稿有诀窍。做任何工作都有用心，用心思考、用心梳理、用心总结，才能日日有长进！
网事如梦
发表于 2019-8-27 08:57:15
删除段首总括句。总括句是提纲掣领，但是为了压缩字数，又不便减少分述部分的内容。就把曾经精心概括提炼的总括句删去吧，没什么好说
黄叙阳
发表于 2019-8-27 16:57:19
括句是提纲掣领，但是为了压缩字数，又不便减少分述部分的内容。就把曾经精心概括提炼的总括句删去吧，没什么好说的。这样能够砍掉很大篇幅，直奔主题。
大海漂流人
发表于 2019-8-27 21:14:26
完成时是过去已经完成的工作，进行时是正在进行的工作，将来时是即将进行的工作。
kuminger
发表于 2019-8-28 19:09:32
很有用！！！值得学习！！！