子非魚 发表于 2019-5-23 22:07:10

综合人员把业务材料写实的诀窍!避免为写而写、简单概括归纳!让领导夸赞你的材料厚度!

<section class="" style="margin-top: 20px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 20px 5px 5px; padding: 5px; max-width: 100%; border: 2px solid rgb(240, 84, 84); border-radius: 4px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; letter-spacing: 0.544px; display: flex; justify-content: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin-top: -20px; padding-right: 25px; padding-left: 25px; max-width: 100%; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><p class="" style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(240, 84, 84); font-size: 18px; min-width: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(171, 25, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">愚拙</strong></span></p></section></section><section style="padding: 20px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; text-indent: 2em; line-height: normal; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 82, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">前几天几位读友在星球的提问很有典型性,将题目和愚拙的体会作以分享,供大家参考。</strong></span></p></section></section></section><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;">匿名提问: 您好!我在一个自收自支的事业单位,单位工作业务性比较强,我在单位负责写综合性材料和单位一把手的一些讲话致辞之类。但本人没有业务背景,没有对工作的通透认识,写出来的东西总是缺乏灵魂,显得大而空,为了写而写。请问,这种情况怎么改善呢?请指导,谢谢!</span></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">愚拙回答:</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">能正视自身的短板,就已成功了一大半。何况能长期给一把手写材料,说明你的基本功底应很雄厚。你指出的问题,也是很多搞文字综合工作的通病,总体建议是要把功夫下到平时。几点具体意见如下:</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">1.平时要深度研究业务,特别是领导高度重视的业务。一个好的综合人员,应是半个业务能手,而不是简单地进行概括归纳。建议你以领导关注的工作为切入点,平时多向业务科室骨干请教,多看一些专业性强、理论性强的报刊杂志,多看具体业务方面的政策文件及综合性文稿,全面搞清上情、下情、内情、外情。</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">2.平时要动态跟进重要业务相关进展。要保持对重要业务进展的敏感性,多跟负责审核稿件同志、收文办文同志沟通,及时把阶段性重要文稿、会议材料搞到手,动态了解其相关进展情况。多跟负责督查的同志沟通,看工作的具体进展情况,及时梳理成效、发现问题、务虚对策。如有必要,再同相关科室负责同志进行深入了解。并研究领导这些工作的批示指示,及时把握领导的关注点、兴奋点变化情况,时刻站在以文叙事辅政鼎新的视角,主动思考工作。</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">3.收到任务时,更要抓好即时调度调研。接到工作任务时,要事无巨细地把所有储备集中兜在一起看一看,把最新情况通过电话问一问,把重要工作通过座谈研一研,以确保梳理成效、问题阐述、形势分析和对策制定的全面性。通常,在拟写重要性材料之前,应集中看数百份材料、打百十个电话、跑几个单位。</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">供参考。</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-indent: 0em; widows: 1; text-align: center; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">阳光心情 提问: 愚拙老师您好,本人最近要写一个党课讲稿,题目是争做新时代的追梦人。公司属于房地产行业主要承担保障房建设,公司下面还有物业公司,我自己初步的理了一下思路,想围绕新思想领航、党建引领、高质量发展筑梦、树起纪律标尺拧紧思想发条等几个方面撰写,但感觉还是缺少点啥,希望老师能再帮助梳理、指导一下思路。&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;</strong></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">另外,本人还想在工作之余投投稿,扩大视野,顺便赚点稿费,但缺少投稿渠道,希望老师给推荐一些,谢谢!</strong></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">愚拙回答:</strong></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></strong></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">从你的描述,还看不出这个党课,谁讲,谁听,什么场合讲。另你说的几个角度看,和追梦的主题,好像也不太搭。党课和讲话稿的不同之处在于馅厚皮薄,即要更多的采用见人见事的手法,多一些追梦典型人物和案例。</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">几条建议如下:</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">一,充分研究什么是你单位所处领域的追梦人以及怎么做你单位所处领域的追梦人。比如,保障住房这项业务和“房子是用来住的”的关系,保障住房对低收入群体的保障作用,好物业对居民的作用。无论是从衣食住行四方面讲,还是两不愁三保障讲,都是老百姓的梦寐以求的大事啊,这也是你们的追梦点。你再顺着捋捋,琢磨透了再动笔。</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">二,充分挖掘你们单位或者你们领域的典型人物及故事,尤其是切入点小但典型意义又很大的,作为主要的内容支撑。</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">三,先做完这些调度调研工作后,再结合谁讲谁听什么场合讲等具体情况,研究具体体例问题。总体原则是,做到能够短时间打动听者!</strong></p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; text-indent: 2em; line-height: 1.75em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">四,投稿方面,多看看你们行业内的刊物,关于经济方面的,关于房地产方面的,关于保障房方面的,比如住建部的有关刊物,比如经济日报等等。先从读者开始,等你熟悉这些刊物版面,从中滋养很多,并认为自己写的东西符合某板块风格时,就大胆投。在没有采用前,要不断总结原因,不断改进技术,总会有成功时的。</strong></p><p></p>
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