猫眼看文 发表于 2018-10-18 11:31:44

秘书工作一等奖征文:在低飞处丰满羽翼

<section style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin-top: 0.5em; margin-bottom: 0.5em; max-width: 100%; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; border-radius: 5px; width: 562.391px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); line-height: 2.3; font-size: 20.8px; display: inline-block; background-color: rgb(255, 3, 3); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">在低飞处丰满羽翼</strong></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; widows: 1; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(136, 136, 136); box-sizing: border-box !important;">王 &nbsp;冰</span></strong></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; widows: 1; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(136, 136, 136); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br></span></strong></p><p style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;; font-size: 14px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-indent: 28px; widows: 1; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">自任连队文书始,悠忽间,从事公文写作已愈二十载。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">回望来路,叩问初心,深感公文一入深似海,滋味遍尝苦犹甘</span></strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">,其中最令我难忘并惕惕于心的是组织股老股长的教诲:在低飞处丰满羽翼。<br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 股长姓唐,是把我选进机关教我写作的引路人。我军校毕业到连队当排长不久,就赶上了一场综合性大演习。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">各路参演大军砺剑霍霍,一决高下,苍莽的科尔沁大草原上顿时风起云涌,狼烟</span></strong><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">飞渡</span></strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。我所在团队架设起流动野战广播,在各个驻训点穿行,激发官兵斗志,唐股长是组稿人。我被火热的鏖兵场景所感动,经常顾不上吃饭休息蹲在掩体里或趴在土堆上写稿子。演习结束,我被选调到组织股,后来得知是股长向团领导力荐了我。<br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 股长白白净净,斯文儒雅,在这个以“三猛”著称的团队黑铁塔般的人群中,显得有些“另类”。“另类”的还有他的工作方法,我刚到股里报到就领教了。股里编制三人,另一个干事和我都是刚进机关的“生手”,当时年度总结工作已经铺开,上级工作组在团里活动,还要筹备迎接外国驻华武官代表团前来参观,</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">材料一个接着一个,压茬扎堆。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">就在这当口,股长却让我打起背包到班排与战士“五同”,说是好好摸摸基层底数。对此我很不理解,内心甚至有些抵触:安排工作总得分个轻重缓急吧,再说我是从战士堆里摸爬滚打出来的,连队那点事用得着这样下去摸吗?<br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 股长看我有情绪,把我叫去了他办公室。我口无遮拦把想法一股脑儿倾倒而出,他却像没事人似的,只是笑了笑便岔开话题和我聊起了他的“另类”军旅人生。他是名牌大学中文系的研究生,那时本科生还很抢手,他这个“香饽饽”毕业即被军区机关挖去当“笔杆子”。孰料两年后已是正营职的他主动要求下基层,当起了低于现职两级的指导员,后来升作股长仍属高职低配。这让我有些惊讶,原来斯斯文文的他竟然是个如此有才华、有个性和有故事的人</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“</span><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">雄鹰搏击长空,始于曾经的低飞,低空试翼,不仅是让已有的羽毛更硬实,也是在不断丰满羽翼,为将来高飞做准备</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">”</span></span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">,他接下自我抒怀式的喃喃自语,却如重锤把我的自以为是击得粉碎。<br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我“铆”在班排,果然捉到不少“活鱼”,因为有扎实的数据、鲜活的事例和原生态的语言支撑,我撰写的调查报告被军区政工简报刊发并获了奖,参与总结的团队年终总结经验也被集团军转发。首次“低飞”的收获,让我信服并坚定践行股长的“低飞论”。在师团工作期间,我做到了所有营、连包括每一个小点都去过,所有的营连主官都熟悉,每一个团的菜地、猪圈、鱼塘在什么地方都清楚。我时常自我提醒,自己说不明白的道理、没搞清的思路就不到下边去糊弄人,明知基层落实不了事就不打领导机关招牌逼基层干,自己看了都脸红的文章宁可不上稿也不写。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">一次次的“低飞”,让我深感不沾泥土香,写不出好文章,字里行间有了深沉的大众底色,流淌着体恤关心的情怀,文字就会活起来,拥有“会说话”的生命力量。</span></strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; widows: 1; text-align: center; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(136, 136, 136); box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></strong></p><p style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;; font-size: 14px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; text-indent: 28px; widows: 1; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;后来进入大机关工作,对股长的“低飞论”和语言文风问题有了进一步的理解和认识。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">鲜活的语言存在于人民群众之中,文字的力量来自人民群众。</strong></span><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">文脉关乎国运,文字文风,不仅</span></strong><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">是一</span></strong><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">个人立场、态度、方法和感情的表达,也是一个时代社会风貌的体现</span></strong></span><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">历史上,越是语言文风追求浮华高蹈,刻意雕饰平仄对仗,国家越容易走下坡路。魏晋文风铺排靡丽,高官名士热衷于“不打粮食”的清谈,结果国家治理得一塌糊涂。宋明理学讲求名节,文字来文字去,理论脱离实际,最终空谈误国。讲话发言、写作著文漠视群众、脱离群众,就会丧失其本来意义,更谈不上宣传、引导、发动、组织群众。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">文风话风方面,习近平总书记堪称楷模,他一扫人们反感的大话、套话、空话和“官话”,说真话,说实话,说老百姓爱听的贴心话,似春水一般清澈,令人耳目一新。<br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;造化弄人伤离别,苍天无目却爱才。处在39岁的大好年华,老股长谇然逝去,我永远失去了一位恩重如山的兄长和领导</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">。</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“</span><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">在低飞处丰满羽翼”,多年来他的声音一直回响,在我耳际、在我心底,我也经常把他的教诲转述给身边有志于公文写作者,习惯和甘于低飞,在下降或貌似下降的低飞中渐渐丰满羽翼——轻盈而密实的羽翼!</span></strong></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(57, 49, 49); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 12px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">作者:原济南军区政治部 王 冰&nbsp;</span></strong></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: -apple-system-font, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, &quot;PingFang SC&quot;, &quot;Hiragino Sans GB&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei UI&quot;, &quot;Microsoft YaHei&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 27.2px; text-align: justify; widows: 1; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(57, 49, 49); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 12px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">来源:江苏省写作学会公文写作专业委员会“我与公文写作”主题征文获奖作品。</span></strong></span></p><p></p>

15757387820 发表于 2018-10-23 08:37:23

情真意切,能有这样一位导师确实荣幸,愿历经千帆,不忘初心。
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