交流发言如何出彩
<p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">交流发言材料是机关工作中经常遇到的一种文体。把这种材料写好，能够使自己的交流发言出彩。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="88656" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><section style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 30px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: center;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; vertical-align: top;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 2.5em; height: 2.5em; border: 2px solid rgb(237, 80, 66);"></section><section style="margin-top: -2em; margin-left: 0.5em; padding-right: 5px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(254, 255, 255);"><section class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">贵在挖掘思想、给人启迪</span></strong></section></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">在交流发言中，常见有的同志连篇累牍讲自己的工作，但别的同志听起来兴趣不大。特别是一些比较专业的工作，说得越多越长，就越让人觉得乏味。出现这种情况，客观上是因为隔行如隔山，别人不大懂；主观上分析，是讲话者没有把大多数人当成交流的对象。“你的本职不是我的本职，把本职工作做好是你的本职，说得再好也是自己讲的。”如果交流发言中没有能够激起大家共鸣的思想，而是就工作说工作，就算内容再丰富，听众也不好接受。</span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(0, 128, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(217, 33, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">真正好的交流发言，往往并不那么复杂，就是结合交流的主题，摆出几个“理儿”，再视情阐述清楚，就能很快引起大家的兴趣。</strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">要知道，交流发言不是工作报告，也不是事迹介绍、经验总结，而是跟大家进行一种平等的对话。讲的工作越具体，距离听众的距离就会越远，就越容易偏离大家的关注点。</span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">工作是千差万别的，其中的规律却处处相通。有时候，改变一个陈旧观念，提供一个崭新思维的切入点，比讲一大堆措施还有积极意义。思想的沟通交流，归根结底要靠思想来促动。需要注意的是，如果思想起得太高太大了，会让人不知所云；口子开得太小了，又会让人觉得过于平常。<span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(217, 33, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">刚刚合适的思想，往往就是那些与主题扣得比较紧，能够跳出局部看全局的新感悟、新体会。</strong></span></span></p><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="paragraph" class="" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="paragraph" class="" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section></section></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="88656" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><section style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 30px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: center;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; vertical-align: top;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 2.5em; height: 2.5em; border: 2px solid rgb(237, 80, 66);"></section><section style="margin-top: -2em; margin-left: 0.5em; padding-right: 5px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(254, 255, 255);"><section class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">贵在抓住关键、开门见山</strong></span></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">交流发言是个人的公众讲话，在一定程度上反映一个人的才识、能力和素质，许多同志都非常重视，事先通常要认真准备一个书面材料。</span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">听稿子和看稿子的区别在于，听稿子的人关注语言的内容，思想新、道理实，讲述再多不觉其长；思想不新、道理不正，用语再少也是硬伤。而看稿子的人往往关注文字的信息，稿子的长短及布局直接影响观感和阅读的质量。<span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(217, 33, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">交流材料一讲而过，只要观点鲜明、道理讲得通，就不失为一个好发言；而书面材料则讲求观点准确、论述严密、语言规范、结构合理。</strong></span></span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(217, 33, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></strong></span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">我们常常在准备交流发言材料时，自觉不自觉地把它当成一个书面材料来写，</span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">结构务求严整，标题讲求一致，有的甚至还分了“大一大二大三”“小一小二小三”，每一小块内既摆事实又讲道理，既出观点又提对策。其实，这样的发言，往往只讲出一两个小块，别人就能猜测出下文的讲法或内容，注意力自然会下降。</span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(217, 33, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">好的发言往往不求结构整齐，观点摆出来，道理讲透了，大家自然会饶有兴趣地听下去。</strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">在思想交流中，有什么说什么、什么问题认识得透讲什么、什么问题关键讲什么，比死拼硬凑更能打动人。把人所共知、似曾相识的思想和观点省去，反而显得与众不同。</span></p><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="paragraph" class="" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section data-role="paragraph" class="" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section></section></section><section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="88656" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><section style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 30px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: center;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; vertical-align: top;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 2.5em; height: 2.5em; border: 2px solid rgb(237, 80, 66);"></section><section style="margin-top: -2em; margin-left: 0.5em; padding-right: 5px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; text-align: left; background-color: rgb(254, 255, 255);"><section class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">贵在有起有伏、平奇相间</strong></span></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">由于要讲给大家听，许多同志会引经据典、充实内容、雕琢语言。材料看起来挺顺，内容也很丰富，道理可能也很深刻，但人的耳朵是感性的，用语太书面化，往往让人觉得文绉绉、硬邦邦的；内容太丰富了，也会让人觉得复杂而散乱。</span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(217, 33, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">在思想交流中，摆出鲜明的观点，用自己有切身体会的话语阐述清楚，用典型事例加以佐证，不求千篇一律，不求面面俱到，往往更能让大家信服。</strong></span><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">一次交流下来，能有一两句话、一两个事例，给大家留下比较深刻的印象，就已经不失为一篇好材料。</span></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="margin-right: 32px; margin-left: 32px; max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; text-align: justify; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(89, 89, 89); box-sizing: border-box !important;">交流发言重在思想的原创性，它不是演讲、教化，更不是炫耀，真诚地给大家奉献出所感所想，反而更能打动人、说服人。真诚的东西往往又是朴素的、通俗的，有的可能思考已久，在语言上已经提炼为“阳春白雪”，有的可能还处于自发状态，属于“下里巴人”。不管是“阳春白雪”还是“下里巴人”，只要能够准确深刻地表达出需要表达的思想，都会让人心领神会、怦然心动。</span></p><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); box-sizing: border-box !important;">（文章摘自《秘书工作》杂志2017年第1期。作者：张瑞志）</span></p><p></p>
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