秘书工作室 发表于 2017-7-6 21:53:39

初写领导讲话稿“五字诀”

<section label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section data-id="88212" data-tools="135编辑器"><section><p><span style="font-family: 微软雅黑;"></span><br></p><section style="font-family: 微软雅黑;" label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section style="border-width: 0px; box-sizing: border-box;" data-id="5" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(33, 33, 34)" data-color="rgb(33, 33, 34)"><p style="margin: 2px auto; padding: 15px; border: 2px dashed rgb(33, 33, 34); line-height: 25px; text-indent: 2em; font-size: 14px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><span style="text-align: justify; text-indent: 2em; font-size: 17px;">起草领导讲话稿是秘书工作一项重要职责。初写领导讲话稿,以下五个方面可参考。</span></p></section><p><br></p><section style="border-width: 0px; box-sizing: border-box;" data-role="paragraph"><p><br></p></section></section></section></section><section label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section data-id="88173" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(47, 116, 172)" data-color="rgb(47, 116, 172)"><section><section><section><section style="font-family: 微软雅黑;" label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section style="padding-right: 15px; padding-left: 15px; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="border-width: 0px; box-sizing: border-box;" data-id="88173" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(47, 116, 172)" data-color="rgb(47, 116, 172)"><section style="vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="font-size: 30.4px; margin-top: -3px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%;"><section style="margin: -3px 2px; padding: 2px 6px; border: 1px solid transparent; width: 60px; text-align: center; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 34.96px; display: inline-block; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(47, 116, 172);"><p title="" data-original-title="">1</p></section></section></section><section style="margin-left: -25px; vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="margin-top: 30px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%; -ms-transform: rotate(0deg); -webkit-transform: rotate(0deg); transform: rotate(0deg); -moz-transform: rotate(0deg); -o-transform: rotate(0deg);"><section style="text-align: justify; color: rgb(47, 116, 172); line-height: 1.3; letter-spacing: 0px; padding-right: 10px; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box;"><p><span style="color: rgb(63, 63, 63); font-size: 16px;" data-brushtype="text">   <span style="font-size: 24px;"><strong>“摸”</strong></span></span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 10px;"><p style="text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong><span style="font-size: 17px;">首先,摸清领导的意图。</span></strong><span style="font-size: 17px;"></span></span><span style="color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 17px;">每篇讲话都是在特定的条件下进行的,因而必须摸清其背景、目的和意义所在。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>其次,摸清讲话的内容。</strong></span>一般而言,起草讲话稿前,领导会与写作班子研究讨论讲话稿的基本框架或大致轮廓。作为起草人员,必须认真琢磨、心领神会、把握精髓。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>再次,摸清讲话的风格。</strong></span>每位领导都有独特的讲话艺术和风格,因而只有把握领导的语言习惯,才能写出有个性的讲话稿来。</span></p></section></section></section></section><p title="" data-original-title=""><br></p><section style="font-family: 微软雅黑;" label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section style="padding-right: 15px; padding-left: 15px; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="border-width: 0px; box-sizing: border-box;" data-id="88173" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(47, 116, 172)" data-color="rgb(47, 116, 172)"><section style="vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="font-size: 30.4px; margin-top: -3px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%;"><section style="margin: -3px 2px; padding: 2px 6px; border: 1px solid transparent; width: 60px; text-align: center; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 34.96px; display: inline-block; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(47, 116, 172);"><p title="" data-original-title="">2</p></section></section></section><section style="margin-left: -25px; vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="margin-top: 30px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%; -ms-transform: rotate(0deg); -webkit-transform: rotate(0deg); transform: rotate(0deg); -moz-transform: rotate(0deg); -o-transform: rotate(0deg);"><section style="text-align: justify; color: rgb(47, 116, 172); line-height: 1.3; letter-spacing: 0px; padding-right: 10px; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box;"><p><span style="color: rgb(63, 63, 63); font-size: 16px;" data-brushtype="text">    <span style="font-size: 24px;"><strong>“搜”</strong></span></span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 10px;"><p style="text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170); font-size: 17px;"><strong>首先,搜集上情。</strong></span><span style="font-size: 17px;"><strong><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"></span></strong><span style="color: rgb(89, 89, 89);">重点是搜集上级党委、政府和有关部门的讲话资料,主要包括相关的政策法规、文件、领导讲话等。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>其次,搜集下情。</strong></span>主要是搜集与讲话内容相关的基层情况,比如,起草安全生产会议上的讲话,就要搜集当地安全生产形势与现状、主要特点、存在的问题及抓安全生产的主要措施等资料。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>再次,搜集先例。</strong></span>主要指以往涉及这方面内容的讲话材料,既要搜集以往几年当地领导的同类讲话稿,又可借鉴外地领导的同类讲话材料。</span></span></p></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><section label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section data-id="88173" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(47, 116, 172)" data-color="rgb(47, 116, 172)"><section><p><br></p><section style="font-family: 微软雅黑;" label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section style="padding-right: 15px; padding-left: 15px; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="border-width: 0px; box-sizing: border-box;" data-id="88173" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(47, 116, 172)" data-color="rgb(47, 116, 172)"><section style="vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="font-size: 30.4px; margin-top: -3px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%;"><section style="margin: -3px 2px; padding: 2px 6px; border: 1px solid transparent; width: 60px; text-align: center; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 34.96px; display: inline-block; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(47, 116, 172);"><p title="" data-original-title="">3</p></section></section></section><section style="margin-left: -25px; vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="margin-top: 30px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%; -ms-transform: rotate(0deg); -webkit-transform: rotate(0deg); transform: rotate(0deg); -moz-transform: rotate(0deg); -o-transform: rotate(0deg);"><section style="text-align: justify; color: rgb(47, 116, 172); line-height: 1.3; letter-spacing: 0px; padding-right: 10px; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box;"><p><span style="color: rgb(63, 63, 63); font-size: 16px;" data-brushtype="text">    <span style="font-size: 24px;"><strong>“拟”</strong></span></span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 10px;"><p style="text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 17px;">拟写讲话稿提纲是非常重要的一步。</span><span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170); font-size: 17px;"><strong>首先,提纲布局要严密。</strong></span><span style="color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 17px;">讲话稿的布局,就是章节和段落的层次安排。比如,起草林业工作会议上的讲话,如果打算从思想认识、工作重点、保障措施三大板块布局,那么每一个大板块就是一个章节。如果每一个大板块又从几个小板块分述,比如工作重点,从加大林业生态建设的力度、加大林业产业发展的力度、加大森林资源保护的力度三个方面分述,那么每一个小板块就是一个段落层次。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>其次,提纲观点要鲜明。</strong></span>观点鲜明,必须做到新颖、恰当。所谓新颖,就是观点要与时俱进、有新意;所谓恰当,就是观点要揭示主旨、切中要害、恰如其分。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>再次,提纲逻辑要严谨。</strong></span>无论是谋篇布局还是提炼观点,大板块与大板块之间、大板块与小板块之间、小板块与小板块之间都要层次清晰、逻辑严密,既不能出现交叉或重复,也不能有所遗漏,且要经得起推敲。</span></p></section></section></section></section></section></section></section><p><br></p><section style="font-family: 微软雅黑;" label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section style="padding-right: 15px; padding-left: 15px; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="border-width: 0px; box-sizing: border-box;" data-id="88173" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(47, 116, 172)" data-color="rgb(47, 116, 172)"><section style="vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="font-size: 30.4px; margin-top: -3px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%;"><section style="margin: -3px 2px; padding: 2px 6px; border: 1px solid transparent; width: 60px; text-align: center; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 34.96px; display: inline-block; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(47, 116, 172);"><p title="" data-original-title="">4</p></section></section></section><section style="margin-left: -25px; vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="margin-top: 30px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%; -ms-transform: rotate(0deg); -webkit-transform: rotate(0deg); transform: rotate(0deg); -moz-transform: rotate(0deg); -o-transform: rotate(0deg);"><section style="text-align: justify; color: rgb(47, 116, 172); line-height: 1.3; letter-spacing: 0px; padding-right: 10px; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box;"><p><span style="color: rgb(63, 63, 63); font-size: 16px;" data-brushtype="text">    <span style="font-size: 24px;"><strong>“写”</strong></span></span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 10px;"><p style="text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170); font-size: 17px;"><strong>首先,遵循提纲写。</strong></span><span style="font-size: 17px;"><strong><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"></span></strong><span style="color: rgb(89, 89, 89);">提纲是起草讲话稿的主要依据,动笔时最好是遵循提纲、一气呵成,当然起草过程也是一个再思考再深化的过程,提纲难免会有不尽如人意的地方,这就要求我们必须边起草边完善,但大的改动要谨慎。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>其次,突出主题写。</strong></span>讲话稿必须围绕主题和观点展开,切忌东拉西扯、不着边际。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>再次,把握文风写。</strong></span>在语言的运用上,既要准确精练,又要通俗生动,使讲者朗朗上口,听者流畅顺耳。同时,还要把握领导讲话风格,突出个性化特色。</span></span></p></section></section></section></section><p><br></p><section style="font-family: 微软雅黑;" label="Powered by 135editor.com" data-role="outer"><section style="padding-right: 15px; padding-left: 15px; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="border-width: 0px; box-sizing: border-box;" data-id="88173" data-tools="135编辑器" data-custom="rgb(47, 116, 172)" data-color="rgb(47, 116, 172)"><section style="vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="font-size: 30.4px; margin-top: -3px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%;"><section style="margin: -3px 2px; padding: 2px 6px; border: 1px solid transparent; width: 60px; text-align: center; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 34.96px; display: inline-block; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(47, 116, 172);"><p title="" data-original-title="">5</p></section></section></section><section style="margin-left: -25px; vertical-align: top; display: inline-block;"><section style="margin-top: 30px; margin-right: 0%; margin-left: 0%; -ms-transform: rotate(0deg); -webkit-transform: rotate(0deg); transform: rotate(0deg); -moz-transform: rotate(0deg); -o-transform: rotate(0deg);"><section style="text-align: justify; color: rgb(47, 116, 172); line-height: 1.3; letter-spacing: 0px; padding-right: 10px; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box;"><p><span style="color: rgb(63, 63, 63); font-size: 16px;" data-brushtype="text">    <span style="font-size: 24px;"><strong>“改”</strong></span></span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin-top: 10px;"><p style="text-align: justify; line-height: 1.75em; text-indent: 2em; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: rgb(89, 89, 89); font-size: 17px;">“文章不厌百回改”。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>首先,换位思考改。</strong></span>修改讲话稿,既要从领导的角度思考“讲什么、怎么讲”的问题,又要从与会者的角度思考“需听什么、愿听什么”的问题,这样才能发现初稿存在的问题和不足,进而去修改和补充。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>其次,寻找“榜样”改。</strong></span>通过比较“高手”们写的同类讲话稿,可以查找出初稿的缺陷和差距。<span style="color: rgb(0, 122, 170);"><strong>再次,征求意见改。</strong></span>一方面要征求写作班子人员的意见,充分听取和吸纳有益的建议;另一方面要征求领导对初稿的看法,按领导的意见进行修改完善。</span></p></section></section></section></section><p><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">(文章摘自《秘书工作》杂志。作者:姚元森)</span></p><p></p>
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