公文中习以为常的词汇，也可能是错的呀
<p></p><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><section class="" data-source="bj.96weixin.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin: 1em auto; max-width: 100%; width: 670px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; border-top-width: 3px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: rgb(61, 167, 66); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="padding: 12px; max-width: 100%; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-left-width: 1px; border-style: none solid solid; border-right-color: rgb(197, 200, 204); border-bottom-color: rgb(197, 200, 204); border-left-color: rgb(197, 200, 204); line-height: 1.5em; border-bottom-left-radius: 10px; border-bottom-right-radius: 10px; box-shadow: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.2) 2px 2px 5px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“学习进修"、“安排部署”等等这些我们随手用的文句，大家早就习以为常，其实这些的用法都错了！公文中谓语多余的现象比较突出，今天就带大家用实例来看看到底怎样用好谓语。</p></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section class="" data-source="bj.96weixin.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; border-width: 0px; border-style: none; border-top-color: rgb(0, 128, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 5px; max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; width: 556px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="padding-right: 35px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-bottom-color: rgb(0, 128, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; float: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; width: 0px; height: 0px; border-right-width: 6px; border-right-style: solid; border-right-color: rgb(0, 128, 255); border-bottom-width: 3px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-bottom-color: transparent; border-top-width: 3px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: transparent; float: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section class="" style="margin-left: 1px; max-width: 100%; width: 23px; height: 6px; float: left; clear: none; color: rgb(255, 255, 238); box-sizing: border-box !important; background-color: rgb(0, 128, 255);"></section></section><section style="margin-top: -0.7em; margin-left: 10px; max-width: 100%; float: left; clear: none; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 17.0667px; color: rgb(0, 128, 255); white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">同义词共做谓语</span></strong></span></section></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例1：全市副处级以上干部有××%左右的人在党校或干部管理学院进修学习过。<br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“进修”指为了提高政治和业务水平而进一步学习（多指短时离岗学习），词义含“学习”。此例可删去“学习”。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例2：×日，市政协召开“一号提案”协商办理专题会议，听取“一号提案”办理情况汇报，安排部署下一阶段任务。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“安排”和“部署”词义重复，此例可删去“安排”。另，“听取”后面的“一号提案”也可删去。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例3：最高人民检察院《关于……的通知》和……下发后，各级人民检察院认真贯彻实施落实，把这项工作当作今年的一项重要任务来抓……（《最高人民检察院关于进一步做好服刑人员申诉办理工作的通知》，高检发办字〔2003〕13号）</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“实施”和“落实”词义重复，此例可删去“实施”。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例4：使用问号应以句子表示疑问语气为依据，而并不根据句子中包含有疑问词。（《标点符号用法》，GB/T15834-2011）</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“包含”即里面含有之义，后面不宜再加“有”，宜将“包含有”改成“包含”或“含有”。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section class="" data-source="bj.96weixin.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; border-width: 0px; border-style: none; border-top-color: rgb(0, 128, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 5px; max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; width: 556px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="padding-right: 35px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-bottom-color: rgb(0, 128, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; float: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; width: 0px; height: 0px; border-right-width: 6px; border-right-style: solid; border-right-color: rgb(0, 128, 255); border-bottom-width: 3px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-bottom-color: transparent; border-top-width: 3px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: transparent; float: left; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></section><section class="" style="margin-left: 1px; max-width: 100%; width: 23px; height: 6px; float: left; clear: none; color: rgb(255, 255, 238); box-sizing: border-box !important; background-color: rgb(0, 128, 255);"></section></section><section style="margin-top: -0.7em; margin-left: 10px; max-width: 100%; float: left; clear: none; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 17.0667px; color: rgb(0, 128, 255); white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">赘加谓语中心词</span></strong></span></section></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">必须删去的情形</strong></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例1：对使用未注册商标不标明企业名称或地址的商品，要进行登记造册。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“进行”不仅多余，而且和“造册”不搭配，应删去。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例2：命令（令）机关所行使的是国家权力，而且命令（令）表述的内容是国家和地方、军队的重大事项，受理机关和人员必须毫无条件地坚持遵照执行，它的强制性要高于其他文种。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“毫无条件地坚持遵照执行”中，应删去“坚持”。另，“命令（令）机关”表述不当，应是“命令（令）的发布机关”。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例3：公民土地发生“被征收”时，原则上补偿的标准应以“被征收人”所在地的房屋市场价为准，政府必须通过正常的程序，被征收人同意并补偿合理的基础上，再进行拆迁，不得强拆。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“公民土地发生‘被征收’”，应删去“发生”。另，引号多余，语序不当，介词“在”残缺。可修改为：“公民土地被征收时，补偿的标准原则上应以被征收人所在地的房屋市场价为准，政府必须通过正常的程序，在被征收人同意并补偿合理的基础上进行拆迁，不得强拆。”</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">可补宾语的情形</strong></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例1：×月×日，×××委托法院采取强制执行，终于获得赔偿。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：宜删去“采取”。若保留，应在“执行”后加上“措施”。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例2：×日上午，××煤矿发生瓦斯燃烧，16人被困井下。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：宜删去“发生”。若保留，应在“燃烧”后加上“事故”。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例3：各地农业银行、信用社要积极支持粮食专业户发展养猪、养牛，帮助解决饲料供应等问题。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“支持……发展养猪、养牛”，宜删去“发展”。若保留，应改成“支持……发展养猪、养牛业”。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例4：近年来一些地方出现了毁林开荒、乱占林地，致使森林资源遭到严重破坏……（《最高人民法院关于依法严厉打击破坏森林资源犯罪活动的通知》，法发〔1999〕247号）</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“毁林开荒、乱占林地”可直接做谓语，宜删去“出现了”。若保留，应在“乱占林地”后加上“的现象”。另，“近年来”后面宜加逗号。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section class="" data-source="bj.96weixin.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="max-width: 100%; border-width: 0px; border-style: none; border-top-color: rgb(0, 128, 255); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section style="margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 5px; max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; width: 556px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" style="padding-right: 35px; padding-left: 5px; max-width: 100%; display: inline-block; border-bottom-width: 1px; 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box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 24px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 17.0667px; color: rgb(0, 128, 255); white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">相关联的句子赘加谓语</span></strong></span></section></section></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例1：为了鼓励先进，激励后进，党委决定，对上半年工作积极、学习上进、表现突出、模范带头作用强的先进部门和先进个人通报表彰，以资鼓励。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：“为了鼓励……以资鼓励”，文字和语意前后重复。应将“以资鼓励”连同前面的逗号一并删去。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例2：经行署研究同意，并报四川省××厅批准，同意设立四川××集团中心拍卖行。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：应将前面的“同意”和其后的逗号一并删去。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">例3：要根据不同季节开展应急演练，如春季要以防火为主，夏秋季以防汛、防泥石流等地质灾害为主，冬季以防冻、防雾、防滑为主进行演练。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">修改：前分句已表明“开展应急演练”，后分句句尾的“进行演练”多余，应删去。另，“如春季要以防火为主”中的“要”宜删去。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section class="" data-source="bj.96weixin.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; 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color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 2em; box-sizing: border-box !important;">**** Hidden Message *****</div></div> 前分句已表明“开展应急演练”，后分句句尾的“进行演练”多余，应删去。 相当有用多发一些这样的文章 让我们学习学习 看来学无止境，就是大手笔也会出错的，谢谢分享学习的机会。 不错，以后期望多发表此类文稿，让我们菜鸟多多学习！ 感觉非常不错 温顾以前学过的知识 非常感谢。这些写作常识，在工作中非常实用。 多学习，才有进步。多总结，才有提高。 文章打磨的方法，需要多学习。 不错的文章，值得学习、借鉴。 每天一学，日积月累，成效明显 非常棒！细微处见真功夫。 公文写作重在积累。
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