雾端凝眸 发表于 2014-10-28 21:00:00

公文论证实例分析

<p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">1</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">、能不能?可以不可以?的区别</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">能不能、该不该是原则问题。可以不可以是能力问题。做不做到是现实问题。例句:</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">但警察也有自己的职责范围,不是什么都能做的,也不是什么都可以做的,更不是什么都能做到的</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-family: 宋体; font-size: 12pt;">。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 24pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-size: 12pt;">2</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-family: 宋体; font-size: 12pt;">、</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">市民是城市的主人,市民素质决定着城市的文明程度。建设“水市湖城”,就是要把衡水这座古城建设得更繁荣,更富强,更文明。实现“水市湖城”战略构想,离不开市民素质大幅、快速提高。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 24pt;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-family: 宋体; font-size: 12pt; background-color: white;">分析:素质决定文明,建设“水市湖城”目的是文明,实现“水市湖城”离不开提高素质。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">3</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">、一个倍受欢迎的城市,除了建筑风格独特,更是因为人文风貌优良。城市的硬件建设要靠市民的精神文明去滋养,去呵护。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体; background-color: white;">分析:好城市因为人文优良,——解释——硬件靠文明滋养呵护。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">4</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">、用心谋事、踏实干事、善于成事的干部</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 24pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-family: 宋体; font-size: 12pt;">分析:成事的过程:</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">谋、干、成。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 24pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-size: 12pt;">5</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-family: 宋体; font-size: 12pt;">、论点和“为什么”有时候可以在同一段。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">6</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">、高中属基础教育,是人生打基础的阶段。应打什么样的基础?应打好身体基础、知识基础、能力基础。但这一切基础的基础,还是一个心态基础。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体; background-color: white;">分析:再剥一层皮,逐层深入提出论点,由表及里、由地面到地下、由一楼上至二楼。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 24pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-size: 12pt;">7</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-family: 宋体; font-size: 12pt;">、</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">市场法则就是公平交易,花一分钱买一分钱的货。虽然可能贵点、贱点,沾点光或吃点亏,但总体不会差。<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">200</span>元钱能买<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">200</span>元东西,&nbsp;<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">2000</span>元钱能买<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">2000</span>元的东西;要想花&nbsp;<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">200</span>元钱买<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">2000</span>元的东西,除非售货员眼神不好看错了钱。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体; background-color: white;">学习也遵从市场法则,就是公平回报,出一分力气得一分成绩。虽然考场发挥可能好点、差点,幸运点或倒霉点,但总体不会差。出一分力能得一分成绩,出十分力得十分成绩;要想少出力得好成绩,除非阅卷老师眼神不好弄错了分。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体; background-color: white;">分析:比喻论证,形象生动,道理浅显、明白、有力。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 12pt; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 31.5pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-size: 12pt;">8</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 23.333332061767578px; font-family: 宋体; font-size: 12pt;">、</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; font-family: 宋体;">人们常说<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">“</span>组织材料<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">”</span>,就是<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">“</span>七分实料、三分组织<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">”</span>;也就是基础实料(具体措施、效果)占七分,能力技巧(语言、条理等)占三分。无实料则内容“空”,无技巧则水平“低”。材料工作<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">“</span>七分实料、三分技巧<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal;">”</span>的特点,决定了材料的成败七分在来自实际的基础材料,三分在文字工作人员的写作技巧;同时也决定了要提高材料水平,必须两手抓,一手抓写作能力,一手抓基础材料,两手都要硬。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体; background-color: white;">分析:两个决定雄辩证明不容置疑。同时,两个决定之间关系科学,前一个决定是针对“为什么”的需要,后一个决定是针对“怎么做”的需要。</span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="background-color: white;"><span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US" style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">9</span><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体;">、今年以来,在市委、市政府的正确领导下,我老秘网市“三年大变样”工作取得了很大成绩。拆迁进展加快,市区环境质量进一步好转。</span></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.833332061767578px; color: rgb(50, 62, 50); font-family: simsun; text-indent: 21pt;"><span style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 宋体; background-color: white;">分析:前一句是大层面,后一句是在前一句的范围内。</span></p><p></p>

老猫 发表于 2015-9-29 12:12:07

分析透彻,很见功力。

请请 发表于 2017-3-11 06:16:29

9、今年以来,在市委、市政府的正确领导下,我老秘网市“三年大变样”工作取得了很大成绩。拆迁进展加快,市区环境质量进一步好转。 分析:前一句是大层面,后一句是在前一句的范围内。

山东小秘书 发表于 2017-4-28 17:30:33

窃以为公文,言为声,思于前,立意为心,主题为神,标题为骨,事务为身

二号人物 发表于 2018-11-30 16:12:53

从头至尾,认真的分析和观察,很受启发。希望楼主多更新这类素材的文章。

lpc20180703 发表于 2019-4-28 14:00:32

有的地方还是没有看明白
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