于安 发表于 2014-8-18 14:43:43

《众秘夜思》第2集:列提纲、明思路——8.12晚文字漫谈(端方)

<div align="left"> </div><div align="center" style="text-align: left;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:44.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:22.0pt;font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;
mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体">&nbsp;</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="text-align:center;text-indent:44.0pt;
mso-char-indent-count:2.0;line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:22.0pt;font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-hansi-font-family:
方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体">8.12</span><span style="font-size:22.0pt;
font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体">晚文字漫谈——端方<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="text-align:center;text-indent:32.15pt;
mso-char-indent-count:2.0;line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:
楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:
0pt">(根据文字内容整理)<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:32.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:方正仿宋_GBK;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:32.15pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">时间:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">2014</span><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">年<span lang="EN-US">8</span>月<span lang="EN-US">12</span>日<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:32.15pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">地点:</span></b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">老秘网“文稿修改演播室”(<span lang="EN-US">QQ</span>群号:<span lang="EN-US">366351120</span>)<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:32.15pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">主讲:</span></b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:32.15pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">整理:</span></b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">杨苏<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:32.15pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">具体内容:<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:32.15pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;</span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="text-align:center;line-height:30.0pt;
mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:方正小标宋简体;
mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;color:black;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">一、对一篇汇报材料的讨论<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;
mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:黑体;mso-hansi-font-family:黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:黑体">老猫:某市美丽乡村创建工作情况汇报,大家帮某同学推敲一组标题,如何?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">(一)立足转型强村,打造宜业乡村。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">(二)坚持“五水共治”,打造宜人乡村</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">(三)着眼增收致富,打造宜农乡村。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">(四)突出民生保障,打造宜居乡村。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">魅力乡村,幸福乡村、宜居乡村、富裕乡村之类的,我的意思是用一根线串起来,让这组小标题形成一个整体。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">标题分两部分,前半部分亮手段(做法),后半部分凸显成效。四个乡村的思路不错,但内容上缺少支撑,建议再从内容上面抓取下逻辑。另外,感觉题目不足以体现内容。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">嗯,内容来讲有并列的,也有逻辑递进关系,不知如何把握。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">猫老:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">富增收入,美展新颜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">霞光:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">民生保障作为出发点,惠农增收作为增长点呢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">妥否</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">? <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">杨苏<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">感觉民生保障包括很多方面,不只是宜居。宜居一般是和生态环境放在一起的,民生保障一般和和谐、幸福搭配在一起。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">北纬<span lang="EN-US">30</span>度:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">顺序调整一下,环境放最后。不知道第一点内容。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">整个提纲是这样子的:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">一、三任书记接力干,一张蓝图抓创建</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">1</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:
宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、一以贯之谋创建。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">2</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:
宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、规划引领明方向。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">3</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:
宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、政策支撑强保障。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">4</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:
宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、健全机制促落实。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">二、十年时间抓整治,美丽乡村显成效</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(一)坚持把转型强村作为美丽乡村建设的</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">重头戏</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">”</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,乡村发展水平有效提升。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、依靠主体强动力。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、产村联动促增收。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 3</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、突出重点建项目。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp; </span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(二)坚持把</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">五水共治</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">”</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">作为美丽乡村建设的</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">主抓手</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">”</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,农村人居环境持续改善。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">全域治污</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">”<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、推进农村生活污水治理。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、做好农村面源污染整治。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;3</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:
宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、构建卫生长效管理机制。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp; </span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(三)坚持把惠农增收作为美丽乡村建设的</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">出发点</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">”</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,农民生活水平不断提高。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、提高农民素质</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、发展现代农业。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 3</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、促进农民增收。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp; </span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(四)坚持把民生保障作为美丽乡村建设的</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">“”</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,农村社会不断和谐。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、不断优化公共服务。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、不断繁荣乡村文化。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 3</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、不断完善社会管理。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">三、二次出发重实效,谱写</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">两美</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">”</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">新篇章</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、深化农村改革。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、做强农业产业。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 3</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、推进农村治理。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:
仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 4</span></i><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:
宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、确保农民实惠。</span></i><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">一级标题可以不动,二级标题提炼修改一下吧。主体产业是什么呢?</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">产村联动促增收。坚持建设与发展并重,因地制宜做到美丽乡村建设与产业项目发展并举。<b>一是</b>整合特色产业。根据不同的区位优势、产业基础和发展趋势,规划产业布局,整合产业资源,大力发展专业市场,壮大村集体经济。如古山镇大园东村依托发达的废旧钢铁产业,引导周边</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">5</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">个自然村向中心村集聚,建成了拥有</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">533</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">个摊位的废旧钢铁市场,村集体经济年收入</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">1000</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">多万元。<b>二是</b>发展物业经济。针对区位优势明显的村,通过农村集体建设用地开发和项目建设,盘活土地,投资发展集体物业项目。如城西新区小东陈村,通过与相邻</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">4</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">个村联合建立五星社区,集聚人口</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">2500</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">多人,盘活建设用地</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">29</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">万平方米,建设城西物流中心,实现村民、企业、环境的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">多赢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">”</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">。</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:一般正文里不用一是二是三是的吗?</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">用是可以用,问题不在这里。这个材料感觉像是工作总结,挂了个美丽乡村的头,较牵强。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">那没有,美丽乡村建设也包括这些内容的,而不仅仅是村庄整治。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我不是这个意思,美丽乡村汇报也好,生态乡村汇报也好,这些内容都可以用。一个汇报材料第一是基本情况,第二是对于创建活动本身的相关情况汇报,第三是做法,第四适当点点问题。当然,问题也可以根据实际情况不点。至于你的措施,应该是结合本情况来的。而且此提纲里,做法没有必要分这么多层次,容易造成逻辑上的混乱。你先要明确出这么几个重点。比如,要说转型,你想表达的转型是什么转型,怎么转型,转出什么成效,结合美丽乡村落到优化产业结构上比较好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我内容太多了是嘛?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">不是多,是乱了。我看完的体会是包罗万象,但具体内容看完却记不住多少。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">层次可以简化,什么都想说,太杂了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">不过不是不能说,要理顺一下。举个例子来说,就用猫总凝练的题目(一)坚持把转型强村作为美丽乡村建设的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">重头戏</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">”</span><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:
宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,乡村发展水平有效提升。这个标题要写,要明确围绕的中心是转型强村。效果是乡村发展水平。对应转型强村找内容。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">那我把内容归纳一下,第二部分就点明五六点重点内容。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">内容不在于多少,要说出亮点与特色。大家都在创建,为什么选你。因为你创建的有成效,亮点多,做法新。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">这也有点像二元标题。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">北纬<span lang="EN-US">30</span>度<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt"> 39</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">号同学你这是典型的观点加事迹的写法,要把材料融会贯通,并从中提炼观点。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;
font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我发表一下个人的想法,有以下几个方面的建议:<b>一是</b>老秘并不了解学员工作的具体环境和具体情况,如果要这样一对一的修改,是需要花费一些时间慢慢对接的;<b>二是</b>就本文来说存在一些逻辑问题,可能是在撰稿之初就犯了一些逻辑性错误,观点(小标题)是根据内容提炼出来的,而本文的小标题对仗工整,乍一看给人的感觉是比较好,但一看内容就有点文不对题了。例如:第一部分,作为乡级政府谈何政策支持?乡镇有制定政策的权限吗?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我们是县级市,不是乡镇。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">北纬<span lang="EN-US">30</span>度:</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">县级,包括地市级都没有制定政策的权限,都是贯彻落实上级的政策。此外,从文章的提纲看,二级标题不能囊括内容。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">县级市应该有制定本县美丽乡村建设实施意见和考核标准、政策支持等权力的吧。二级标题与子标题脱节。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">即便乡镇没有制定政策的权限,但也可以出台一些举措,比如以奖代补,纳入考核。这些可以归入政策层面。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">对,这个问题我同意。而且这也不是核心问题。核心问题可能还是逻辑架构上。我觉得晓斌对转型可能没有理解透。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">石子云<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">@39</span></i></b><b><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">号同学胡晓斌</span></i></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">——剖析材料的写法。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">指尖绚烂<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">这篇六大点,有点多,整合下。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.0pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="text-align:center;line-height:30.0pt;
mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:方正小标宋简体;
mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;color:black;
mso-font-kerning:0pt">二、列提纲、明思路</span><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">&nbsp;</span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;
mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">在刚才讨论的基础上,我想谈一谈关于列提纲的一点体会。我所理解的提纲就是动笔之前想好的内容,材料的骨架,也是我们通常所说的谋篇布局。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;
mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt"></span></b></p>**** Hidden Message *****<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">如果反过来,写加强社区制度建设,对</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312">93</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">向社区制度进行梳理,非常平,看不出什么特色与亮点来。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">铁树凝<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">需求为王,刨树刨根,循此,深挖,梳理片段,轮廓,佐以素材,碰撞,修正思路,揉融观点素材,思路为纲,纲举目张,终是符合有关要求,才算好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">总之写作很难,难在何处,之一是思维。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">铁树凝<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">难在先方有可贵后生!思路素材之间有一碰撞修正过程不是一成不变的,中间很多时候有变化。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:28.1pt;mso-char-indent-count:2.0;
line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"><b><span style="font-size:
14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:
楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">老猫<span lang="EN-US">:</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;">好标题的灵感从哪里来?老猫的体会是从段落内容中提炼,从个别字词中联想,从上级文件中生发,从参考资料中化用,从交流碰撞中偶得。</span></p></div>

usb000 发表于 2014-8-18 23:09:09

每次只有等到12点左右才能静下心来,分享你们的疑惑和感悟,期待早日加入你们。

甘肃小秘 发表于 2014-8-19 09:56:21

标题分两部分,前半部分亮手段(做法),后半部分凸显成效。

beijiguang 发表于 2014-8-19 11:11:45

案例与论述结合,讲得比较到位,学习了。

zxb 发表于 2014-8-19 22:35:44

材料的骨架,也是我们通常所说的谋篇布局

毛迎新 发表于 2014-8-20 18:16:41

学习中,应该早点报到,长知识了。谢谢

墨家青木宇 发表于 2014-8-21 09:03:28

看得迷迷糊糊,自家水平太洼,跟着学习下

逸风 发表于 2014-8-21 09:15:58

刚才讨论的基础上,我想谈一谈关于列提纲的一点体会。我所理解的提纲就是动笔之前想好的内容,材料的骨架,也是我们通

杨雯 发表于 2014-8-21 09:57:31

讨论的很精彩,而且都是提到点子上的,值得学习

Sundy. 发表于 2014-8-21 10:51:01

刚刚大学毕业,初入职场,来向前辈们学习一下。
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